Ok, well, most of my drawings aren't related to KH. I don't draw a whole lot of KH fanart because somehow I always feel like it doesn't look right. If I put this in the wrong spot, by all means move it :p Here's some I did a little while ago: Lust from FMA: Other stuff (ideas for the stories I'm writing):
These are nice ^^ I don't have the time to do a really proper CnC right now so I am just mention small things. - Some of them are pretty good propotioned but some of them need a little work. -The second one looks a little flat, maybe try making it a little more 'flowing'. - I like the last one a lot it's pretty nice. Keep it up ~~
^-^' Ok I know that Alice has better drawings... But I love the lust picture still! *Tries not to glomp*
Thanks guys ^_^ Usually when I draw they never turn out exactly how I want them to XD I'm trying to edit the second one, but I'm scared I'm going to ruin it =P A few others: ^I just had to be carrying water at the same time T_T (dis one's very old =P please excuse my messiness XD)
Eh? Mari too perhaps? :3 You're essential concept of anatomy is fairly good, there are just things like general symmetry, development, and naturalization that could use improvement...if heaven shines upon me my tablet is working so I can fix you up with some redlines in a bit. Lust's headshot is overall very nice. The only suggestions I have are giving her a bit of collar bone definition, since her character is older and I believe in the manga I've read I commonly see Arakawa give that feature to her. There's also a piece of hair at the top, that seems to come out of a mass that is sweeping more to the side, I think you meant for it to be bent downwards like that, but since it wasn't portrayed at all it's hard to tell. I suppose it just makes it seem a bit random. Original character - She has a particularly wide neck, and the way it overlaps her shoulders makes her upper body appear kind of bara in that general area. Her arms breast and torso...well, I don't really know how to describe it. For now, all I can say is it's very undefined. Torsos aren't really just two curved lines...it has to be more elaborate for it to look less amateur. Her arms are the same, they lack definition. Muscles in the arm appear even in lanky people. Third - General anatomy and proportions are really off. The style is really generic - like, even more than my own - because her eyes are no more than black dots. Pupils, shading, reflections, etc. will help your face look less noobish. Your lacking in clothing folds, which again give it an amateur feel. Really, the behavior of the clothing in this picture is very unrealistic, and by that, I mean even for a yukata-like sleeve it's behaving in a weird way. I guess this is more of a cultural confusion than an artistic problem. The bow and hair...I'll get to it later if my pen is functioning. Fourth - Not touching it. Fifth - I'm sure you've seen tears before and come on, you know they don't look like that. :P Pleeeease don't do the whole tear 'drop' thing when they're present on the face. Again, your style looks really generic here. Try to go for more definition in the face and nose...I just can't stress that enough. I feel like I'm looking at Inuyasha. :\ Another naturalizing issue; due to the fact that water isn't like a viscous jelly and has surface tension, it doesn't look wavy. It should really just have a curved top if anything. Long post I made thar. X3 lol, I page stretch all the time. XD
Thanks Alice ^_^ That helped immensely Since I'm lefthanded, a lot of the time lines that were once clear usually blur after I'm done drawing because my hand rubs against the paper :(And yes, I know, his body is wrong. I can't exactly grasp what it is, but it's all wrong >_>
It looks really nice, and suprisingly (because everyone does anime >.>) it looks realistic. Keep up the good work.
