Digital Art [Yuna] I need criticism xD

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Axel, Feb 26, 2007.

  1. Axel Chaser

    Joined:
    Sep 30, 2006
    Location:
    Partying, making tags and Staring at the Sun.
    33
    Yeah, I don't want the usual cheesy comments. I want/need CnC that could possibly help me out. Go hard on me, I don't care.

    [​IMG]
     
  2. -Riku- Merlin's Housekeeper

    Joined:
    Feb 25, 2007
    Location:
    In the Darkness
    0
    47
    It's very cool, although I think it may benefit from some sort of impressive writing in the left-hand side, even if it's just "Yuna".
     
  3. Axel Chaser

    Joined:
    Sep 30, 2006
    Location:
    Partying, making tags and Staring at the Sun.
    33
    Possibly. I was stumped on text. But then I decided it looked good as one of those sigs w/o text.
     
  4. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

    Joined:
    Sep 26, 2006
    Location:
    :uoıʇɐɔo1
    241
    Possibly your best. Well, you want real CnC? Kay

    The right starts out good but the sig gets progressively crappier as it goes left. The C4D's stand out on the left far too much and give it too much depth. It looks like you just kinda threw the c4d's on together.

    Also, your focal point is Yuna, however, you've made the flow of the sig go fromt he spiral thing ont he left of her head outward, which is making the focal point the swirly thing. It's a nice affect but Yuna I think should be moved to the left a bit to gain more focus.

    The lighting is good but it could easily be better. Your lightning seems as though you just brushed it white over a lens flare. Either way it was a nice affect.

    Also, there's no text, in a sig that probably should have it.

    Overall, your major flaw is the C4D's they're nice but they EACH stand out from the sig to much. The point of a C4D is to enhance a sig while still blending into it. Instead of a nice flow of blending the C4D's look piled on one after the other. Therefore I give you a 6/10
     
  5. Axel Chaser

    Joined:
    Sep 30, 2006
    Location:
    Partying, making tags and Staring at the Sun.
    33
    Cool, I was hoping for something like this.
    I guess the biggest problem is the C4ds but thats OK for me since I've only started on sigs with real C4ds. Possibly the sig should have been formatted muc hmore like the right side of the sig.
     
  6. DarknessKingdom The Kingpin of the TV

    Joined:
    Sep 30, 2006
    31
    Nice.

    I must say though I agree when it goes from left to right, just right up to Yuna, I find it random. I mean, in my opinion, she seems to be in front of a grafftii wall.

    But nonetheless, it kicks ***.