Digital Art You're Crashing, But You're No Wave.

^ Thread title from one of my favorite FOB songs.




Worked with a lot of different styles and settings on this one. I'm very proud of the outcome. ;)

CnC would be much appreciated.

 

It's nice, but there's too much contrast in ym opinion. Also, the sig looks a bit to grainy around Riku, and there's not a lot of flow. I guess it's OKAY, but it's not your best.

7/10

 

You expect flow here? :/ I wasn'te ven aiming for that; it's not the point of the style. :/

And thanks for at least COMMENTING after you viewed the sig. >_> (25 views with 1 comment).

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Lmao..I always comment if I view =D
Anyways, even if you din aim for flow, it needs some.
Contrary to Cin, I like the contrast.
I don't like the way of lighting though. It looks cool at the bottom but the random negspaces aren't great.
8.75/10 I've seen better from you.

 

I really like it. I'd ask to use it, but I'm rather attached to my Rise Against one. >>

My only complaint is that I think you should crop the left side a bit.

 

A V2. Took some advice from a lot of diff. people here. CnC?

 

I think it would look better with some black around him know what I mean? :\ 8/10

 

i dono why you guys say theres no flow.
i see flow going \ / like that. more noticeable on the right because of the bars, but the Spatter Smudge (thats what it looks like, im unsure) looks oriented towards that type of flow on the left.
anyways, i dont really think the stock fits in here. Try a bigger stock so its easier to define the focal points features. Also, it should reflect the lighting you have, but it all looks flat.
other than that, V2 looks better, theres no green/purple Contrast in the light behind the stock xD

 

Those are really pretty effects melted in together with Riku - I personally feel that the colors and everything blend in really really well here - including the text (: I don't agree with a good bunch of what the others said above...

Anyway I much prefer V1 though :/

 

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I think it is really nice because I think the colour mix is great :)

 

On the contrary C4E, I never said no flow. I said now a lot. To be honest, a few bars does not make that much flow.

Either way, V2 ftw. Like the new coloring.

 

Yes indeed, v2 has way better coloring. Still I don't think the stock looks good. But I don't think that's lack of work...just it doesn't fit.
Lighting is somewhat better too.

 

A few bars doesn't, sure, but there doesn't have to be perfectly straight lines over the whole sig to symbolize flow.

I made the flow mostly noticeable to people who have a keen eye for art. :/

anyway, thanks guys. :)

 

I never said you personally said that, and also i said it was More noticeable because of the bars. not that the bars made the only flow on the right.