Just did this one in class as people did presentations for my Digital Design class; my first that I've done that I haven't used a tut to make, and my favorite so far :D If you've got any suggestions give 'em quick, I can't edit things after Thursday unless I stay after school, my last Digital Design class is Thursday and I don't have the programs my school does :P The only thing I'd change is to find a better quality pic, but I couldn't find any, so this is the best I got :/ EDIT : Just realized it might be really pale...I had my screen really dimmed b/c the bright screen was hurting my eyes when the lights in the room were off. I think it looks fine now that I've turned the screen back up to normal brightness, but that may be one thing that people think I need to change.
Which is precisely why you're not in any position to give him any criticism. ... I'm kidding. Anyways, this piece looks extremely pleasing to the eye with its simplicity and beautiful use of color. However, it's a bit too 'foggy', so tone that down a bit. Darken the whole thing some, mostly at the edges and the top-right hand region.
It really isn't too pale. I like how there is a LITTLE darkness but it is balanced out by all the light. It's just a tad too bright is all that gets me :/ But other than that, you did pretty nice IMO :3
Her, not him, Ryuuga :P Foggy...just meaning it's blurred too much? I could try sharpening it, not sure what effect that'd give it though. Any tips on how to get rid of the foggy-ness? There's brushes on the bottom left and top right to make it paler; is that what you're talking about? or the render? tyvm for the good comments :D Glad you like it, and thanks for the critique.
