Your Character in my story.

OOC: thanks! :)
CHAPTER 10
"What!?" Ranax yelled. Couldn't he get some peace from the organazation once in a while? Luxie pulled out two 8-foot long sythes. Ranax pulled out his sword and the keyblade. Luxie looked like a wimp, but she landed a few hits on Ranax, and they were enough to draw blood from his mouth. "Urghh.." he couhed. He finally managed to land a few hits on Luxie, but they didn't seem to hurt her. Ranax would not risk another darkness cannon. Those things would sap your own strengh if you used them too mutch. "Your not that tough, are ya?" Luxie exclaimed.

 

You're welcome^-^:)

 

OMG! This story is awsome! It should be published into a real book or maybe even a movie!

 

OOC: Thank you very mutch!
CHAPTER 11
"I..give up.." Ranax figured that scienc this was a tornement, the first one to say that would be the loser. It worked. "Ladies and gentleman, Luxie is the winner of the first match. The next match will be her against Hayner!" The crowd cheered, and Ranax got off the stage. He figured that there would be another fight for him. Maybe for first or second place, but he had to rest. He gave himself a cure spell and sat down on the bench watching Hayner and Luxie duke it out. Luxie had the upper hand, and poor Hayner couldn't keep up. He fell face down in the dirt after 10 minutes. "Ladies and gentleman, Luxie is the winner of the second match. The next round will be Ranax and Hayner!" The crowd cheered, and Ranax went to fight again.

 

wow, i hope i didn't cause hayner and ranax any pain>.<

 

OOC: Don't worry. They're okay! :)

 

Raxtion. A guardian angel sent to protect sora from harm of a demons desires

Rako. A demon sent from hell to destroy sora and his friends and plunge the universe into darkness

 

Rage. The physical manifestation of the every Keyblade's rage, but regrets not destroying them all when he had the chance and strives to gain that chance again.

 

OOC: Okay.
CHAPTER 12
Ranax pulled out his keyblade and sword, and Hayner had his struggle mallet at the ready. Hayner was fast, and pulled hits on Ranax when he wasn't looking. Ranax tried to defend, and finally got a couple of large blows in that knocked him out. "Our winner for this match is Ranax! Our next match will be Luxie and Rako!" Ranax ran off the stage, while Luxie and a man dressed completly in black and holding a huge sword came up. 'That must be Rako.' Ranax thought. The bell rang and Rako immediatly went after Luxie, sliceing and diceing her. She tried to keep up with her two sythes, but Rako's sword was too mutch. Luxie dissapered into oblivion. "What? I'm fading? No way! Not possible.." She dissapered into dust. "Ladies and gentleman, Rako has won this fight, but Luxie seems to have dissapered. But the next fight will be against Ranax and Raxtion!" The crowd yelled, and Ranax went to fight again.

CHAPTER 13
Ranax ran up to a girl that was dressed in white armor that look very beautiful. She had white hair and blue eyes, but the staffs in her hand gave him reason to worry. The bell rang, and Ranax had the upper hand immediatly. The girl scoweled at him. "You killed Sora! I have to kill you now!" She spat at him. "Why?" Ranax yelled back. "I havn't done anything to you." "I was his garden angel. Now I have to kill you to redeem myself." She sent a fire spell his way, and the only thing Ranax thought was 'Seems like everyone is after my ass.' He sent a dark cannon at her face. She amaziningly blocked it and it reflected and hit Ranax. All the strength went out of him and he couldn't fight anymore. "The winner is Raxtion! The next battle will be against Rako and Raxtion!"

 

OH MAN! that was so awsome... good job!

 

OOC: Thanks! Rage will be in there soon. I'm just having some trouble fitting him in.

 

Erm... Hi! Is it ok if you add in my character too?
Her name is: Kyra, and she's learning advanced dark magic. She has a gun which can pierce though magical and physical objects.

 

OOC: Sure!
Chapter 14
Rako and Raxtion glared at each other. When the bell rang, Raxtion unleashed holy hell on him, sending fire spells his way, and hitting him when he blocked them. It seemed like Rako was going all out on her too though. He kept appereing and disspering close to Raxtion and giveing her hits that drew blood. Raxtion finally sent an ice spell that seemed to weaken him. "Uggh.." He couldn't fight anymore. "The winner is Raxtion! It seems that we are running out of time today, so.." The announcer paused for a moment while brick walls went up, seperating the arena into two. "There will be two battles at the same time. Raxtion and Kyra, in one. Rako and Ranax in the other. Good Luck!" The fighters all dissapered into the cell-like parts.

 

Omg!! ^-^ Can't wait to see what happens!! Thank you!

 

Chapter15
Ranax hopped down on the ground and saw that Rako was even more menaceing up close. He drew out his sword and Keyblade. "So, your the guy that made Raxtion mad by killing Sora?" Rako asked. "What's it to you?" Ranax asked, getting really angery. Why did everyone had to get on his case about Sora? As the anger builded up in Ranax, a red light builded up in his Keyblade. Ranax finally hit Rako, but when he did, the red light enveloped them both. When it died down, they both saw that a kid was in front of him. He wore red pants,shoes, everything he wore was red. Even his hair was red spikes. He was holding a red sword. He turned to Ranax. "My name is Rage. Your anger let me out, and for that I thank you kindly. I'll help you in anything you need." Rage told Ranax. "Help me win this tornement!" "Alrighty then." Rage turned around and started beating the crap out of Rako! Ranax wondered what had just happened, but he shrugged it off and started to beat the crap out of Rako too. "Yeahhhrgg..." He cried. He couldn't fight anymore. "Hey, if you made Raxtion mad, then you have an allie." Rako gasped.

 

....wow...

 

CHAPTER 16
"Why would you help me?" Ranax asked Rako. "Well, I don't like Raxtion, so I want to help you." That made sense to Ranax. Rage walked next to him. "How was that?" he asked. "Really good." Rage smiled. "Thanks. Hey, can I destroy your keyblade?" Ranax couldn't belive what he was hearing. "Really? You would get rid of this thing for me?" This would get the Organasation off his back, and maybe they would finally give him his reward. Rage looked suprised. "You don't mind?" "Of course not! Get rid of this blasted thing for me!" Rage took the keyblade from his hand. Red started to build up again in the keyblade. It grew more intense with every passing second. "Fire!" cried Rage. The keyblade let loose a fire spell, but in doing so, melted the keyblade. Ranax's eye's almost went out of their sockets. "H-how did you do that?" he asked. "I just builded up the rage in the keyblade and let loose a fire spell. That sent off a chain reaction. Its quite simple really."
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The fight between Raxtion and Kyra was heating up. Kyra summoned up hordes of demonic creatures, but they were too weak, and Raxtion defeated them all. She finally got close to Kyra and hit her in the back. Kyra turned around and sliced her with a sword and a black staff. Kyra was wearing armour simalir to Raxtion's,but it was black, along with her hair.

 

Wow! This Keeps On Getting Better And Better!!!!!!!!!!

 

yea it does. i wonder what happens next

 

I've made my Character K.H.Nuts13:
Name: Daxma
Age: 15
Appearance:Spiky Blond hair,Dark blue eyes,A black Jacket,Black t-shirt,Black cargo pants(not puffy),Back boots and black gloves.All the pockets were Steel plated.
World:Hollow Bastion
Powers:Can focus the Power of thunder
Personality:Very fun loving but very serious at the right time.his rage and fury coarses through him and is a sight to be feared.it is completely out of character.
Weapons:Two Giant Keyblades (A mix between Terra's Keyblade and the oblivion keyblade