Looks like you put this in the Graphics Shop section by accident. =] I'll move it for you. Well my biggest problem with this is how blurry it is--it just feels very, very unfocused and difficult to look at. I could offer more critique if you remove that and post it up? It's a bit hard to see anything.
kk sure I'll remove the blur.^ ^ here misty see if you can criticize this one.^ ^ I couldn't remove the blur on the other one so I jus made a new one and here it is.^ ^