Oh. Not bad at all. ^^ *purrs* On the left pic, what is that piece of clothing sticking out on front of his bow? Also you used too much wrinkles therefore leaving out reality. One wrinkles effects the entire clothing in their position, stretch, crease, shadow, and etc. A great job on the hair. ^^ The Pants you did an awesome job at with teh wrinkles. I want to see that on the jacket too. ^^ The Bow is good too but make it a bit thicker too. Eye and head is very nice. ^^ *purrs* Overall, you did a good job and could practice on clothing. ^^ Good luck!
I'm kinda disappointed at how badly this turned out given what you said. The left had side sleeve does not have any wrinkles those are stripes of some sort. The same goes for the pants. To answer the question you posed: I have no idea what you mean.
? Stripes? *checks back* Huh. They don't look like stripes to me. :/ For the pants, I can see the over folds you could see when people have creases on their clothes. Plus, wouldn't stripes be going entirely around the jacket and not just bit by bit? Also they would have to be thicker too. *mewles* Try coloring it. I need to see how it actually looks like. Black and white is kinda bad for my CnC since I can't tell what you're drawing here.
The stripes are meant to be on an isolated over armour for his arm like you find in the outfitting of most archers. The stripes themselves are thin because they are supposed to look more like scars in the thicker material than bands of different color. I refuse to color as I have in the past.
Ah. That makes much more sense now. ^^ *purrs* Ah. Okay then. It was just an option. Hmmmm.... usually you don't see that much scars in the armor like that. They are small nicks and sometimes kinda thick too if you add the shadow. So pretty much you kinda overdid it which is okay I guess. Sorry for my misunderstanding in my earlier posts then. *bows*
