This is definitely a step up from your other tags; the effects are cool, and the text placement works in my opinion. That being said, lighting is kinda off when you look at the shadows, which isn't a terribly huge thing, but when you're dealing with OCD people like me, it will be noticed. Also, the lack of color variety makes it a little bland. If you work on those two things, this could be a really fantastic tag. Either way, I do see that you're improving. Well done.
I would echo Advent's complaints here; you would be better off without the C4Ds and lighting the way they are, because you do not have any dark space there to balance it out. I am not sure where the aesthetic feel is supposed to be going. Your last SOTW entry was far better. Because it is stark white, you might want to drop the black border on the outside, or make it a lighter grey. The contrast does not benefit you here in my opinion. Again, only negative comments. How dour of me.
