I finally finished =] the coloring took me a long time to get the effects just right l l l v http://www.kh-vids.net/album.php?albumid=102&pictureid=2375
thnx everyone :D!! although i think her face is a bet weird :3 but its probably me lol RusainaRange ... don't worry i will join *evil grin*
The body looks very good, but the nose looks a little weird. And her eyes look a little out of place too. But overall, it's a nice drawing =)
Its nice hun, just as I suspected :3 You could do with making the ledge a little more prominent so you can actually tell what she is sitting on xD
Well the face and nose do look off, but it still turned out great with the colors and such. Great job! :D
The facial expression doesn't look like her. The accuracy to everything else is perfect though. Personally, I give it a thumbs up because we don't have enough Xion fanart going around.
I think its a COOL name :xp: i know the eyes and nose <-- big problem it was hard her face was just too small for me see perfectly and copy well aww well thank you =] thnx teacher :3 i did ... but the scanner was just to bright ... again D: tank you :D!! true true but i will draw another one and this time in black and white 83 oo n thank you :D!! lol yeah i know in the picture shes with axel and roxas but i just copied her a friend told me ;] besides i wanted you guys to guess if she was having fun or not :] oo n thank you :3
I actually think that it's pretty good. I only have one minor criticism with her face, the corners of Xion's eyes slant down, not up/straight across as you drew in the picture. And I know that you said the backround is actually more prominent than it looks, but I have two suggestions about how to make what she's sitting on pop-out more. One, you should color that part darker, so you can distinguish it from the rest of the backround much easier. Two, instead of coloring using horizontal strokes, use diagonal strokes so there is a better sense of perspective. I may actually be looking at the picture in the wrong way. You copied it from a screenshot, right? Can you post a link to the original picture so I can compare it better? EDIT: And by the way guys, what you two are posting is considered spam, since it's off topic. You should probably delete your posts and stick to PM's, or whichever thread you were talking about.
oo i totally forgot thank you =] well stick to pm's thnx for the tips oo n heres the link http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/...earts/Xion_Axel_and_Roxas_358_2_days_by_a.jpg i think the reason I drew her face very badly is because it was hard for me to see her EDIT: one more thing how do i delete it?
Okay, I think I get it. So you can't actually see the part that she's sitting on. In that case, you should use vertical lines, so it signifies a downward direction. Also, you shouldn't be able to see all of her thigh, because a small (almost triangular) part would be covered by the ledge. The way you have it, it almost looks like she's sitting on the very edge and leaning forward (which is quite dangerous XD), as opposed to sitting comfortably near the back wall. Just removing that tiny piece would probably make the picture look more accurate and 3-dimensional.
woow you speak just like my art teacher XD THANK YOU FOR THE TIPS!! ^^ i will be sure to fix them =] as you can see it was hard to get a full shot of her but i will sketch another picture of her :3 <--[ since there are no Xion sketches ] BTW your the best :] but still how can i delete my previous posts?
lol, I probably learned it from all of my art teachers, I've got two art classes this year that are pretty rough XD Yeah, she was being blocked a bit by Roxas in your source picture, but if you practice drawing the human figure enough, you'll intuitively be able to fill in those blocked spaces ^^ And you can delete posts by pressing "edit" on the bottom right of your post, and then press "delete" while editing your post.
thank you! =] i hope to be just like you in correcting other peoples art work after i finish taking IB in Art :3
