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i hope my character was good enough
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I guess so.So I guess the school name will be Alendale Academy.


And Saint don't be mad.I would have put my school's name but I don't think somebody would vote for it.

 

yeah. /fillers/

 

I think that's a cool school name... Orange High School... :)

but i still vote for Alendale Academy :)

oh and I finished my love story!

Everything was dark. The long, narrow pathway was dimly lighted with candles. Two people were running down it, as fast as they could go. One was a male, and the other was a female. They both seemed to be about 15 years old. The girl was blindfolded and laughed as they ran. The guy was laughing, too. He was leading her by her hand through the maze of an alleyway.

“Where are we going?†She asked as they emerged into an open field.
“You’ll see…†The boy simply said. He led her out over the beautiful, grassy field and started to run up a hill with her. He stopped once they reached the top.
“Okay… we’re here…†He said and smiled. Filled with excitement, the girl quickly removed her blindfold and looked at everything in front of her. Her eyes widened with amazement.
“Wow!†She said.

She stared out beyond the hill at the beautiful scenery. There were plains of long grass that was swaying gently in the breeze. Flowers were scattered among these fields, their radiant colors practically glowing in the moonlight. And in the middle of the fields, there was a small lake. The moonlight reflected off of its clear, blue water and fireflies danced around its edge.
“Dylan…! It’s beautiful!†The girl exclaimed.

Dylan smiled.
“I’m glad to see that you like it up here, Aya…†He said and then sat down in the grass, looking out over the pond. Aya walked over and took a seat right next to him. Both of them lay down and looked at the bright, starry sky. She pointed up at the sky.
“Hey, look! I think that’s Gemini!†She said, smiling. He laughed.
“That’s not Gemini! That’s Sagittarius!†He said and pointed up at a different place in the sky.
“That’s Gemini.â€

“Oh…†Aya said and laughed. She’d never been all that good at astronomy. A couple moments of silence passed by. As Aya was staring at the sky, Dylan looked over at her and smiled. She looked so happy right now. Gently, he put his arm around her shoulder. She blushed a bit and looked at him, smiling. They lay in that grassy field and talked for a few minutes, enjoying the view of the stars and each other’s company. Soon enough, Aya had fallen asleep. Dylan looked over at her and smiled. “I guess I better take her back home…†He thought and gently picked her up and walked back towards the way they had come.

Dylan gently placed Aya in the passenger seat of his car, which they had used to get there. Then he got in the driver’s seat and drove back towards her home. Every now and again, he would glance over at her and smile. She looked like an angel when she slept… It was so adorable to him. Once they had gotten back to her house, he got out of the car again. She was still asleep, so he carried her to the front door. Silently, he then placed a note in her hand. “I wish we could be together forever…†He whispered quietly. “… But we can’t…†Gently, he leaned over and kissed her on the lips. Then, he pulled back away from her and rang the doorbell. Her parents came to the door and he handed her over to them. He said goodbye to them and then went back over to his car and got in. He gave one last glance at the house. “Goodbye, my love…†He said and drove off into the misty night.



“Aya, about tonight… I took you to that fild so that I could see you smile before I go… I’m sorry but I must leave for a bit… But I will return for you… That I promise… I love you, Aya…â€
- Dylan

 

that.... made me sad DX
*goes back to emo corner*

 

oh no... I made joo sad? T-T

 

nah... jut couples make me sad
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Awww thats so sad *tear* I really liked it :)

 

oh...
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It was suppossed to be a happy story, but I couldn't think of a good ending, so i sort of rushed it to a different path XP

so now it's sad/sweet ._.

 

Yes its a sad and sweet story.

 

no prob im emo so im always sad...

 

T-T that was sad!

though, it seems more like the opening to a story to me but meh...

 

So when are we going to start writing it?

 

there's no way im starting... i suck to much...

 

... I really dun like writing sad stories... but I'm kinda moody tonight... >>



... I could probably turn it into a full story and that could be the prologue... What do ya think? >_>



... we're doing seperate short stories, right? or are we still gonna write one big story? :P

 

I think it would be best if we write one big story.

 

we'll start tommoz, that way we're all in our home courts <_< >_> (meaning our houses) i can't start...

and it'd make a great book!

big story AND short stories... short story histories for anyone who needs a history and the big story as a major...

 

should we just like make a thread there we post our characters?

 

That would work too.

 

okay... and that's a great idea, Saint! We should make a thread in the spam zone or somethin' where we can post our characters and stuff that we've planned out for our story... Plus, people can see our progress :3