Writer's Family

Ok,I've typed up about a paragraph of my first person story.Tell me what you think.


Hi, my names Kentaro Matsumoto. I'm a regular high school 15 year old. Nothing out of the ordinary about me. Like other 15 year old guys I worry about girls, video games and other things but that's not important. My father works at a clinic. He actually owns it ever since my grandfather passed away. I have two younger sisters and they’re twins. Amaya is the oldest. She was born 5 minutes before Miyuki. Like I just said, Miyuki is the youngest. Our mother passed away when they were 7. They can’t remember much of her but I tell them stories about our mother every once in a while. A lot of the times it’s before they go to bed. Well anyways, lately I’ve been having these dreams. It’s quite weird. It’s about some kid that had to go on an journey to save his world. I don’t quite remember the kids name but I think he was about my age. He also wielded this sword. I don’t know but they called it a gunblade. It was a sword but it can turn into a gun. Pretty cool huh? Day by day, these dreams have been getting interesting.



I still haven't thought of a title.

 

Hey family :3

 

Hey Family, I need help. Every 2 minutes my throat feels a barfy heat inside, which feels weird, it's making me sick...

 

Maybe t's an upset stomach. Whenever I fee like that, I go wait by the toilet just in case and wait for it to go away, or to lose my lunch. Whichever comes first.

Seems like a Journal entry to me. How do you imagine the character telling this? Are they talking to someone or are they writting this down?

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=51728

I've started a Beta Reader request thread. I did it on another site and it had gotten some success. Anybody willing to check it out?

 

Well it's been going on since yesterday night somewhere at eleven. My throat keeps on burning.

 

You might have to see a doctor for it then. Have you taken any medicine for it yet?

 

soo....it looks like i won't be going to Universal Studios in 3 weeks...

http://www.latimes.com/entertainment/news/la-et-memories2-2008jun02,0,1821458.story

Back to the Future was my favorite set to walk around....and my favorite movie.

 

That's bad. Hopefully things work out there.

No I haven't taken an medicene, my mom would tell me to wait and drink water and juice. Seeing the doctor would be a good suggestion but we can't seem to reach him. Though, I think I'm allergic to a chemical in a medicene, not sure what it is but for my safety....

 

Wow, you can merge your own posts on this site? Cool!

 

*tackles* Hai! =D

 

lol, hey! What's new in the last six hours you tackled me last?

 

Wow, first person to count how long it's been since I last tackled him O.o

Anyways... I uploaded this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RxSXgyBXZDc

:D

 

Actually, it was around 12:30 PM where I am the last time you did, and it was after 6:30 a little while ago. Simple math actually.

ROFL, I half expected a picture of Simon Cowel to pop up after "Judges."

 

ah, I see... ;P

on the last day of school, this was written on my math teacher's whiteboard:
Fish + Fish = Fish squared...
wth?! that's not even right... so my teacher corrected it to:
Fish X Fish = Fish squared...
lol it was so funny XD

ROFL... Well I'm certainly not the Simon of the judging... Amythest is :D lulz...

 

I didn't get that, and yet I still laughed. Interesting.

And I have no idea who amythest is.

 

Wait...I didn't actually follow the link,
but I know what you might be talking about.

a.) The new Simpsons ride taking the place of Back to the Future at Universal

b.) The fire that sparked somehow and destoryed an entire block of old sets...

I hate the bottom choice the most,.....;,;

 

yes to the first,
yes to the second, and also the back to the future clocktower park and part of the tower itself....

 

*Points* NAME CHANGE! NAME CHANGE!

 

*points* The british are coming, the british are coming!

 

*raises eyebrow* That a english joke? XD