Writer's Family

The Snippet

NO, i want you to read my snippet!
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Cole sighed, a deep sigh, as his captors slammed the door shut, removing the last trace of light. Cole gulped lightly looking aroudn in the darkness. A small trickle of water made itself known, as Cole's breath started to ice up. As events continued to unfold, a silent trace of realisation pased Cole... he was going to die here...

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Cole opened his eyes lightly, a small light dimming the room. The trickle of water made itself more appearant now, as shilhouted figures seemed to ease their way into his vision. A dark foreboding surrounded Cole as he stood, his eyes shadded by his hair, as the figures continued to walk around, seeming to ignore Cole. A small moment of silence past, as the figures now walked around him, Cole bit his lip lightly, feeling nothing but cold understanding. A momentary pain ripped through his left arm, Cole's gaze now shifting, his eyes widened in understanding, as a cold white shell started to clasp over his arm. He moved his fingers experimentally, gazing at the shell acknowledgement as the shell's fingers moved in unison...

A few moments passed, the trickle growing louder and louder by the minute. A small chill had been picked up in the air, as more shapes appeared. Birds, Dogs, Cats and Horses now walking in simliarity to the shilhouted figures. Cote took a single step forward, turning in a silent surprise as one of the hounds now charged at him. Cole sword shined as he went to slash at the creature, a single moment of silence passing between the two as the hound ran straight through his sword, a dust like material rushing through him, as the hound continued on it's track...

Cole simply stood there for a few more moments, his gaze now blurred with a light red-iish colour. A small chill of fear was no coursing through his body, as he gazed at his left arm again. A sudden yelp past through his lips as he suddenly leapt away from the shilhouted figures, his eyes looking in every direction the cold fear now completly enveloping him, as his eyes widen in horror as he realised that the shell was attached to his arm. A few more moments of silence, and Cole let out a large scream of terror, his mind racing, his voice going sour and his lips drying up. And then just as suddenly as his fear had appeared, it disappeared, the hound walking away in the same way as before...

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Cyan screamed in surprise, as suddenly a red blur scuired his vision, a sudden presuure shoving him into the ground, as the wall in front of him crumbled, and a large explosion sounded. The door went flying across the room, Cyan's eyes widening in horror, a silent figure stood, silhouted against the light, all but one red eye... Cyan gave one last yelp of pain as his body was slowly rippped apart...
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not the best but it was on the spur of the moment and i have no story leading up to it *shrugs* i thik it's pretty good under circumstances...

 

OMG OMG OMG OMG *hyperventilates*

 

Hyper much? lol

 

not in the least... just freaked out... omg my bf kissed me on the cheek omfg that's never happened to me before! ><
although I wish I were hyper... hyper ish fun ;P

 

Ahhh...

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Ima sooooooo bored ><

 

aaaannnndddd I'm hungry. brb XP

 

Right...

*looks around*

 

Good afternoon, how's life?

 

Good morning everybody.


Hey D I really liked it.

 

morning family
hehee

 

Hey Destined.What's up?

 

hehe just plotting

 

So family...how's your...breakfast?

 

Plotting what?


Hey Mexony.I had cereal haha

 

Hello all. Anything new happening?


ANd as for breakfast, I ate coffe cake :P

 

Oh I love coffee cake.Its so good.

 

i'm plotting for my stories.

And i had pizza for breakfast lol, but V I about died when i saw that fettucini alfredo....hungry.

ALSO:

New Chronicle chapter is up, it's short but i couldn't wait any longer. lol.

 

Last year when I went to Ragging Waters with my friend for her birthday I had pancakes with coke for breakfast lol that was random lol

That was my final for cooking.Everytime I would cook it in my class people would come up to me and say "That looks really good." I would laugh and say thank you haha

 

I can understand having japanese food, but.......Pizza? O_O;


Lol. I do wish I could have some pizza at the moment though. Either way though, if people were saying that, then you probably got a really good grade ^_^

 

Wait till college. All you will eat is Ramen or pizza hot or cold.