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So I'm writing/drawing/voicing a prequel to the kingdom hearts games, I think it's pretty cool but it's still in the planning. A few quotes from the up-coming (hopefully) story/animation.

"Impressive... But this fight's not over." "I WON'T GIVE IN TO THE DARKNESS!" "...Yet."

"You know, I was willing to do anything to get this heart. But now that I have it... I know it's wrong."

"What's going to happen to you when you give him his heart back?" "I don't know. maybe I'll just... fade into nothingness."

"So... I guess this is goodbye."

 

Those quotes make no sense...

And thus, they are awesome. xD

 

lol, yeah! But I'm at a stand-still. I've written all the villians secret reports and some of the more important scenes, But I can't do most of the actual game script. Dialogue is not my strong point.

 

I do both writing, drawing and picture-taking... I really need to work on my fan-fic Oblivion's Wolves now that writing is on my mind...

 

btw any here have a fanfic.net account with their stories on it? Need to be reading more, cause my writing is good, but I'm a bad reader XD

 

What about bleach, I've got 3 box sets of the anime. So I know somethings about bleach, though not a ton like some people around.

 

@Marushi: Wait, it's a GAME? If it is, then what program are you using to make it? Depending on what you're using, I could help...

Also, I have a couple KH prequel/alternate stories, if you're interested. Just search "Final Master" and "At the Chaotic Brink of Insanity" in whatever section fan-fics would be in, (I haven't worked on them in almost a year, so I wouldn't know)...

 

lol, its not actually a game, because i wouldn't be able to make it work. I just called it a game absentmindedly. It would be awesome to make a game, though. For the wii or the game-cube. We only have a ps2 when someone loans one to us.

I'm going to have to check out your stories out sometime. steal your ideas. jk.

 

So I've named my fanfic. It's called "Kingdom Hearts: The forgotten chapter"

 

I got writer's block and it is making me bored, how is everyone else? =_=

 

I have writers block on my KH fanfic, but I pulled a half-started Sonic the Hedgehog fanfic out my dresser and started working on that one.

 

I don't get what's up with me and these half heated attempts to post stories on this site. I guess I may have writter's ADD or something. I see it in myself all the time when I'm working on my bigger projects. *Sigh* I guess I'm just bummbed because no one's interested in them.

 

I would read them, but my mom said she doesn't want me reading fan-fic anymore.

 

So my KH fanfic is coming on nicely. I found Japenese names for all my charecters, I have most of their keyblades designed, and I have almost ten pages written already. It's a lot longer than I thought it would be.

 

Man, I really feel like working on my books, but Our computer needs to be restarted and my files are allready on disc so any progress made will be lost. :( It really stinks too, cause my brain is bursting with creative ideas and I'm running out of pencils.

 

Hi, just joined. i still write a lot, I've done two hand written stories, an Rp, and a Kh fanfic. If you're interested, check out My Rp, Avalon: The world of no return or my Fanfic: What if Sora loved someone else?

:)Hehehe. I like talkin online.

 

So this is my main character for my KH fanfic, "Kingdom Hearts Reveal". Her name is Akari, and she was given the power by her older brother, Hiroaki, a weilder who serves under the master Yasahiro at Radient Gardens (this game takes place around 50 years before BBS). This game talks about when the Keyblade was rediscovered after a very long period of silence. My little sister is making a fanfic about the very first Keyblade Master, and I will reference her story in mine. However, This is Akari. She is fifteen, and in her hand, she holds a keyblade, but I haven't yet added it to the picture. lol, you've seen her before, but you didn't know it was her. Akari is Kairi's grandmother. Or at least, she is in my story. ;D

 

So I changed the name of my fanfic from "Kingdom Hearts; Reveal" to "Kingdom Hearts; the Forgotten Chapters". "Reveal" sounds better, but "the Forgotten Chapters" fits the actual storyline. I'll soon be able to post the first piece of story for editing, even though this group is totally dead and I'm pretty sure no one's going to read it. Oh well, I'll get off my soap box now. :)

 

Kingdom Hearts


The Forgotten Chapters
Part one​

Akari was waiting as the train pulled into the station. She waited there every day until her brother, Hiroaki, came home from work. Hiroaki was a scientist working for Master Yasahiro, and he often would work late and miss his train. It was for this reason that Akari was still standing at the station, even though Hiroaki’s train had come in an hour ago. The train doors opened and within a moment, the station was crowded with people, people coming from and going to all corners of the world. It would be hard to spot Hiroaki through the groups of laughing; talking travelers, but Akari wasn’t worried. He would find her soon enough. She simply faded into the background and observed the people around her. A few men walked past, talking business and dodging the small children racing to the ice-cream stand where the man that sold ice-cream was talking to a girl that visited the stand every day, but never bought anything. Walking past the stand was a man whose face was lined with worry about trivial matters and he paused at the doors of the train to let a family off before he boarded. The family was obviously on vacation and consisted of a man, his wife, and a little girl. The girl was on her fathers shoulders, laughing, and the mother held up a camera and snapped a picture of the both of them. Just then, Akari felt a tap on her shoulder and a voice behind her said “Hey, Missy, you wouldn’t happen to know where a tired, helplessly overworked scientist might find a good meal around here, would ya?” Akari turned around and said “I’ve had dinner waiting at home for an hour, Hiroaki. What kept you?” Hiroaki smiled at her and said “Oh, this and that, that and this, it really doesn’t matter. What’s for dinner?” Hiroaki was a gifted actor, but Akari had known him all her life and she could tell when he was dodging questions. Right now she sensed that He wasn’t telling her the truth. “Cold cereal, the same as always. What’s wrong? What happened?” Hiroaki looked away, avoiding eye contact. “I already told you, nothing you’d be interested in. Besides, I’m starved. Let’s go.” Hiroaki started to head for the door, but Akari held him back. “Hiroaki, stop changing the subject.” Hiroaki paused, irritated, but when he saw Akari’s stern face, he couldn’t help but smile. “Alright,” he said. “If I promise to tell you at home, will you stop badgering me?” Akari pretended to think about it for a minute, but she had already made up her mind. “Ok,” she agreed. No matter what his other faults, Hiroaki always kept his promises. She let go of his arm and they walked out of the station to the plaza outside, where the sun was just beginning to set, casting a red light that shone over the town and all its inhabitants. It glowed on Akari’s plain brown hair, giving it a pretty tint of auburn only seen at this time of day. Even though station plaza was still crowded with people, nobody moved, no one made a sound. Every single man, woman and child was waiting in breathless anticipation as the final moments of the day faded beyond the horizon. Yes, Twilight Town was famous for it’s sunsets, and attracted tourists from all over the world. Akari breathed in the cool evening air and felt peace flow through her being. She smiled, and looked up at Hiroaki. He was standing next to her, and he was watching the sunset same as always, but He felt no peace. Akari could tell, just by looking into his eyes that he was deeply troubled. She looked back at the horizon, but she didn’t see the sun, or the people enjoying it. She saw an unknown danger taking hold on her brother, and it made her afraid. The sun slowly set, spreading darkness over the plaza. The crowds came back to life and went about their business as Hiroaki looked down at his sister and forced a smile. “Come on,” he said. “Let’s go.” And the two of them walked home together.