Writer's Corner : Writer's Corner

I know this is a round about way of doing it, but i've taken the comments that i received from my class for Ash Projekt and retooled and rewrote sections of it for those who are interested in reading it.

Link

 

Lock and Key 17 is up. Yeah, I'm done.

 

Everyone here would shnite themselves if they knew what I've got cookin'.

On my other comp, which has a waaaaay better writing system than this one, I'm currently in the makeing of 15, count 'em FIF-FREAKIN'-TEEN fanfictions.

A fair share of that count would be the Sebax series that I'm going to finally work on, while the rest are familiar and new ideas that I just thought up.

All I need to do is write all of the info on paper, convert it to this comp, and ctrl+v to the forum!

Current projects:
Only Time Will Tell. Second Chapter done, and it's alot longer than my usual semi-long chapies.

A Kingdom Carol. If you've ever seen "Mickey's Once Upon a Christmas", then it's pretty much that with story, but given a face-lift. I've done the intro and working on the first story. (There's only three, and I'm planning on releasing one after the other during December, the last one comeing out right before Christmas.)

 

New story that i've done for Xaale's short story of the month contest:
Nightmare's Past

 

The next portion of Chronicles is up for those interested. Hope you guys enjoy.

 

Story of the month submission.
Sunset Tonight

 

you've been having fun in here without me!

and i've read both short stories submission's

Anyways: I need a review of the overall plot...and tips on bettering myself...here's my story.....i want to know, if you can familiarize with the characters effortlessly and if it's any good overall.

that is all.
Fate

 

I don't mean to be a nuisance, but could anybody give me some general criticism/comments on the sermon I wrote not to long ago (aside from what Trogdor already posted).

 

saaaki i'll do it later tihis morning.
Cherv, we've talke.d

 

Lock & Key 18
I'm unsure of this one. I'd greatly appreciate any comments positive or negative, hopefully constructive on any account.

 

i finaly updated my fan fic if someone is interested.
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=58039&page=5

 

Thanks Shades. That's all I needed to know.

 

No worries Saki.
Lolermee, i'll check yours out tomorrow.

 

>>....<<.....Why is Only Time Will Tell on the fourth page of the Creativity Corner? I swear, I have the second chapter written, I just need to hand-write it all down and transfer the draft onto this computer. Then I can just copy and paste it onto the forum.

But I'd still like some C&C...-_-

Also, speaking of writing, I need good Rp'ers for a new RP I have running. It's desinged particulary for userse who can't get on very much to RP, and has a Nobody/Disney theme to it. Shades would esp find it interesting due to the leader of the Disney-ization XIII.

 

I'm not really into disney and KH that much*gets banned*

but, i am glad you invited me....it's just that *sigh* fan-fics and unoriginal stuff.....it isn't my forte.

 

OK
finally updated to chapter 4.

I've been very busy lately....

the chapter is called "like kids in the rain"

i'm unsure of it, can someone CnC?

here is the link: Fate

 

chapter 11 online.
now i need to work on grammar and spelling in the other chapters >.<

 

Chapter 6 of Whisper is now up.Please tell me what you guys think.

 

Another update to Chronicles for those interested.

 

This one is interested..>.>

And this one freaked out when he read himself in something he didn't write...>,> YOU DO BASE A LITTLE TOO WELL!! DO YOU STALK ME ON A DAILY BASIS SHADES??

xD Just kidding--------No seriously....>>....<<