Wanted to make it more realistic in brightness because it IS supposed to be night when this is happening. Also the orange/black wolf can insult Rose Thorn because they're siblings o3o they're Raging Sun's children, which I why it was relevant to put them thar.
Its well drawn, but the orange/black wolf's eyes look weird o.O I am getting immensely confused with the storyline o_o I dont know, this just doesn't seem to link at all to me. Remember to think about the actual plot of the webcomic too, even though it's important to concentrate on the art 0:3
Plot hasn't started yet really o3o What the mother is doing is that she's trying to hint to Azure Fang that Spoiler she's going to be killed, which after that her dead body is turned into a spirit for her to be able to tell them to leave as the wolves of azure, and then her body becomes normal again and she stays...dead :U After that the plot is pretty much straightforward. And weird how so? o:
I think the pupils are just a tad too small, maybe it's just me but they look odd xD also the light source spots in the eyes should be round if its light o: since the moon will be shining on them. Well, I suppose it could be a crescent moon, but...yeah okay Ill stop rambling xD on a side note, I keep confusing your name for Wolfie's @_@
I knooow they changed it to DiaWolf before I could change it to what I want ;w; I seriously want my username to be Roonald Weeslib xDDD I'll try and make them more round then O: and it's fine, I try to take what you guys say about it and work to make it better xD
