Digital Art WiP

v2


Need help with text and the like. It's a work in progress so don't get too picky. lol But I could certainly use the crit.

<3

 

I'm glad you don't think this is done.

First of all, I don't really like the left side. The render is very rough, and the left side seems smooth and flowy. Hopefully you're going to add more over there. Secondly, it's kind of hard to see (Ven?) the solider. I don't think you've added any lighting yet, but if you have, work on that, too. That little, uh, apparatus on the right looks hawt, just tone down the center an itty bit. I like the whole red-green thing you have going on there. Depth on it looks superb. Colors need major work, but I suppose you're saving that for later. Textures might be pretty.

Off to a good start, but it needs major work.

 

Ty. lol I've only got like 20 layers in this so I'm not surprised you say it needs work. xD

THANKS. :'D

-EDIT-


v2 is up.

 

All of this when you could have actually made me a sig. v.v;; Thanks. <3

 

o.O Sorry dude. I was totally being serious when I made you that sig. No joke. v.v;;

 

I swear to god I really can't tell if you're being serious or not when you say that.

(8:47 PM) INTERNET_WORLD.e: I ADDED A TREE OMG
(8:47 PM) INTERNET_WORLD.e: IT'S ALMOST COMPLETE
*Few lines later*
(8:58 PM) INTERNET_WORLD.e: I know, LMFAO.
(8:58 PM) INTERNET_WORLD.e: Now that I think about it
(8:58 PM) INTERNET_WORLD.e: this is the stupidest
(8:58 PM) INTERNET_WORLD.e: ****ing thing
(8:58 PM) INTERNET_WORLD.e: ever xD
(8:58 PM) NuMbAA: LOL!!!
(8:58 PM) NuMbAA: SERIOUSLY
(8:59 PM) INTERNET_WORLD.e: wow.
(8:59 PM) INTERNET_WORLD.e: xD I feel like I wasted valuable time

>> You totally weren't serious.

 

Yeah, but BEFORE that, when I was making it. >: I was really gonna give it to you.

 

And compared to the quality of the Gladiator sig you made me a long time ago, did you really think I'd be like "AWESOMEE!!! THANKS!!"? xD Probably not. Also, not trying to be mean. But damn dude, you used stock photoshop defaults, a snowman.. and the weirdest tree I've ever seen in my entire life..

 

Hey it was probably the most original piece of work I've done in my entire life.

EDIT: Jesus we got offtrack. xD