Alright, this is actually a present for my love, Ashley. And I couldn't resist but finally get this in gear, seeing how I basically have everything for this series planned out. So, I hope you enjoy it. And I love you, Ashley! By the way, CnC would be very nice. So, if you like it, or want to point out some things, etc. please do comment. :3 Winter 12/21 Written by Skyler Jorgensen Chapter One The snow falls onto the umbrellas and hair of these unexpectingly calm civilians. This frozen powder needs a metaphor. Unbelieveably, no one can seem to find one. Due to the fact it's both dark and light. The white turns black once touching the pavement. It is inescapable facts like this that reassure our society. And sometimes, it gets to the point of needless overexaggeration. Now then, who is to realize all this and not give a damn? Those who actally don't really give a care for anything but, of course, themselves and other people who have so happened to pass the gate to their hearts and trust. And it so happens, there is only one boy who can so happen to be referred as that. And of course, there are more, but this adolescence seems to be more radiant than others. The name, Kazuki Morizawa. Long, but short silver hair that shines beautifully as its androgyny look takes shape wonderfully. And of course, the male himself illuminates this perfect look. Kazuki's eyes deepening in seduction as his crystal green eyes stare, never blankly. And to top it off, the fashion is to compliment his rich roots. Skinny, black pants, and a tan sweater that fits his body just a bit too perfectly. Tight on his chest, stomach, and arms, you can see the body of what girls refer of an angel. Unfortunately for the fan girls, today seems to be a bit too cold for Kazuki's skin. Hence, another tight apparel for him. A pure red, tight hoodie to nearly protect his skin from this torturous cold. What seems to be torturous, is for when people notice Kazuki, they look up in shock. Sitting upon the top of a building, Kazuki simply sits with his arms arched upon his legs. Not minding the snow now falling upon his straightened, smooth, perfect hair. But right when the silence started to draw in, the cell phone that was meant to be muffled into Kazuki's right pocket, began to loudly ring a odd tone. A song called "Orange" by Lil'B, so to be recalled. Scoffing at the minimal chance of isolation for at least the first few hours of awakenness, Kazuki pulls out his black Nokia 6280. Pulling up the top of the phone and pressing the green call button, Kazuki puts the phone by his right ear. "What is it?" "Wow, you sound rather tired." A female voice says, a rather innocently cute voice, at that. "Eh, I woke up about an hour ago, but I'm awake now." "That's what you get for having a loud ringtone." "Or is it because of your angelic voice?" So Kazuki's tone of voice changed into a kindhearted tone. On the other side of the phone, the girl, who so happens to be named Miyuki Hyata, was blushing. The two had a past, but never planned on getting together. It was one thing Kazuki regretted when Miyuki was asked out by a prick. A smartass named Daisuke Aohashi. Another person from Kazuki's past, but a rival to Kazuki. How Miyuki said yes, was always going to be beyond Kazuki's comprehension. Only because he didn't want to think about it. "I doubt that." Miyuki replied softly. "Yeah, we all have our doubts. So, what did you call for?" Kazuki was rushing the conversation, but then again, it was a habit. "Oh, yeah, that's right! Would you like to join me and Mineko for lunch?" "Sure, why not. Where to?" "You know that cute little restaurant we went to last night in Center Gai?" "Are you guys already there?" "We're heading over there." "Alright, I'll go. But I'm inviting Hiro, m'kay?" Kazuki still had that tone in his voice that as sweet as strawberries. No matter how the sentence was shaped to be. "Let's just hope Mineko and Hiro don't hit on each other." Miyuki cooed cutely with a giggle following afterwards. "Yeah, no kidding." "Alright, see you then." "See you!" And so the conversation ended over the phone. Hoping down to the nearly all white pavement, Kazuki pondered himself over to his precious ride. Passed down from his father back in 2006 right before his death from a heart attack. Guess the tension in races always would be fatal. Swinging his perfectly shapen, athletic leg over to the other side of the coffee black Kawasaki Ninja ZX-RR, it was almost immediate when the motorcycle revved with the hum of power. Arching into the right position, the motorcycle left off with the speed its known for. The wind breezing swimmingly astride Kazuki's clothing. The feeling was fabulous. Yes, it was. To feel like you are in heaven in a motorcycle, gives you this passion to ride more and more. But, of course, within these ten minutes of driving around Shibuya, Kazuki arrived to the cafe. With that, Kazuki swung his legs back to a normal stance. Off came his helmet, and swishing his hair back into place, the crystal boy was caught off guard by Miyuki hugging Kazuki. Sending a jolt up Kazuki's spine, relaxing was all he could afterwards with Miyuki's warmth. Without being able to return the hug, Hiro popped out of nowhere right when Miyuki let go of Kazuki. One of her giggle's leaving Kazuki in a statement of adore. But that was interuptted when Hiro put one of his hands on Kazuki's shoulders. "Daydreaming?" Jolting his attention to Hiro with a nearly sad look, Kazuki sighed. "Yeah." But that was soon turned into a smile when Miyuki spoke once again. "Come on, you two. Get in here!" "Right!" The both of them said, then entering the perfectly coloured and occupied restaurant. Truthfully, the restaurant was perfect. Great, polite waiters. The colors went with the place and atmosphere so well. It seemed nothing could ruin this day. Hope Kazuki didn't speak too soon. Taking a seat nearby the window to a oddly beautiful Shibuya street, the four split up on each side of the tabel by gender, of course. Kazuki facing Miyuki, and Hiro facing Mineko, as always. It seemed like time flew too fast for the four, as everything just shot like a gun, right past Kazuki's life. However, still remembering everything from this oddly long situation. A snap of change in light outside than, finally, knocked all four of them in the head. Checking his cell phone, Kazuki was appalled at the time. 12:18 PM. Crap, just an hour before work. "Damn, I have to head to work in about an hour." Kazuki said. His voice changing to a blender mix of shock and calm. "Don't tell me you're leaving." Miyuki said, disappointed. Even if they got to talk for nearly an hour and a half, it still felt bad inside. "Oh no, I'm not leaving. I was only checking." Kazuki put his phone back in his right pocket, moving his hands back up to the smooth oak table. "Glad to hear." Miyuki's smile inspiring Kazuki's. But, half an hour passed, and the group exited the restaurant with full stomachs and smiles on their faces. Joking around and laughing out of the restaurant. Hiro then looked onto his watch, and noticed he had work in about half an hour. "Got work, too. Want me to drive you home, Mineko?" Hiro asked with his etiquette and polite smile dazzling Mineko. "S-sure." Mineko's than sudden cloud of crimson across her cheeks being visible. "See you, two!" So Hiro and Mineko said as they waved off into Hiro's car. Soon after the other two waved goodbye, they looked into each others eyes. Kazuki's crystal green eyes meeting Miyuki's oddly colored violet eyes. "I guess I'm driving you home as well." "Don't get too happy." Miyuki winked to Kazuki as she paced over to his motorcycle. "Father's motorcycle, right?" "You know it. Why do you ask?" Kazuki said, his attention diverted to Miyuki's eyes once again. "I miss the man. Ichizo was a fantastic racer." "Yeah. He sure was." The sorrow of his father's death ringing his scarring memory back to Kazuki. Kazuki's eyes shut to remember solemnly of a great figure in his life. "I'm sorry." "Oh, don't sweat it." Kazuki smiled to change the subject of emotion to happiness. Not like it was usual, but Kazuki never liked talking about his father's death. Or his father in general. Just the simple memoir of his father brung back the worst memories. The crash, the heart attack, everything. "Hey, let's go, Kazuki." All Kazuki could do was nod. Strolling over to his motorcycle, he swung one leg over first, as usual. Handing over an extra helmet to Miyuki, she grasped it. But something shocked Kazuki, once again. Her delicate fingers embraced the surface of Kazuki's momentarily before Miyuki put the helmet back on. 'Hide the blush, Kazuki. Hide it.' Kazuki kept thinking to himself. The emotions locked inside a cell of his own shadow, had been let out. But now wasn't the time. As Miyuki finally swung one of her legs over the back of the motorcycle, she embraced Kazuki's soft waist. The warmth on Kazuki's waist and back were unbearably celestial. 'For some reason, I wonder how Miyuki and I even became friends.' But letting that thought run out of his head for the moment, Kazuki narrowed his eyes slightly to Miyuki. But obviously, not completely looking into her eyes. "Ready?" "Un." Was all Kazuki got as a reply. Of course, Miyuki was scared. And feeling her head laying on his shoulder, would be helping her, but definetely not him. There was nothing vanish his thoughts of Miyuki. And his blush, at that. Forthwith, the perfect example of a male crystalline, was careful with the girl who stepped into his life as a young angel, as he drove onto the street. It didn't take long before they were on the streets toward Miyuki's home. Since Miyuki was fifteen, she didn't exactly live by herself. Just like Kazuki and his mother. However, Hiro and Mineko were different. Mineko lived with her senior friends, and Hiro lived with his brother in seperate apartments. What was strange, was that even though Miyuki's family fought quite a lot, there was no divorce, death, injury, or social disfunction. Not really strange, but when you really think about it, her family was quite abnormal compared to others. As the two were riding in a nonchalant conduct, Miyuki began to talk to Kazuki through the silence. "Kazuki, how's your mother?" Still concentrating upon the road, Kazuki was able to reply. "Great, actually. She just got a new job last night." "Next time you see her, tell her I said congratulations." Miyuki replied with a hidden smile behind her visor. "I'll keep that in mind." Finally, the two arrived to a home in a calm suburb near Koshikawa Korakuen. The both of them got off the motorcycle so Kazuki could put the helmet away and at least hug Miyuki good bye. But through little did Kazuki know what Miyuki was going to bring up. The silence seemed like both a nice, but awkward time to bring it up, but Miyuki couldn't resist. As Miyuki's long, soft brown hair covered her eyes in beauty, but sorrow, Miyuki finally spoke. "I don't want to be with Daisuke." "Why do you bring this up all of the sudden?" But right before a reply, Miyuki waited for Kazuki to stand up. And at the moment Kazuki stood up, his helmet dropped to the light sidewalk. Kazuki's eyes wide, and Miyuki's eyes closed, her hair moved beautifully in the wind before all revealed the two, kissing. Kazuki felt like this was wrong, but couldn't resist. Finally, all of his dreams collaberated to realism. Closing his eyes, Kazuki returned the passionate connection, his arms finding themselves wrapped around Miyuki's waist once again. But soon once they were getting closer, Miyuki broke the kiss and ran off in tears. "I'm sorry, Kazuki." And right before Kazuki could catch her, Miyuki was already approaching the door. "Miyuki!" But the door slammed, and Kazuki was left in loneliness as the breeze blew itself to him in acknowledgement of this terrible solitude. Within this moment, after two years, Kazuki finally shed his tears.
This took me a really long time to read, for some reason. x_x Anyway, this is really good. The only real problem I found with it was that with the dramatic descriptions (at least, to me they seemed dramatic) it got kinda over the top at some parts. D: EDIT: First comment, lolololol.
yeah, i noticed that too. the blend of a realistic setting ,and exageration have a strange blend, but somehow it works. but, i think that the character descrition on some was too little like the other two friends. but, i liked this. just try to work on the other characters a bit. *thumbs up*
