Am I alone where ever I go? No place to be at not at home. I wish one day, I'll find the right place where I belong and needed. There's no fuss, no love, and not even a heart, Is there anyone that can hear my plea? I'm in the darkness that I can't get out of. I'm cold.....I need a guidence,a..person that can help me. I'm the darknees, I'm the Cold hearted. Your Light, Your Fire. You are the light that shines through my darkness You are the fire that melts my ice Have you been the one I am searching for years? Or will I ever be in peace, again?
I love the feeling and detail in this poem. It really expressess the feeling of loneliness that can be in a person's heart. Great job!
Not the best work ever, but it's good. You should continue creating poetry. One thing that bugs me is the abnormal size of the font, letters this big repel people away. I would suggest that you re-size it, so that many people can enjoy your poetry work (^_^)
"No place to be at not at home." This ^ doesn't really make sense to me. Did you mean something else? The poem was okay, just please put spaces after punctuation >> that kind of stuff drives me mad. Remember to read over your work too ~
Like the mixed emotions in this poem. No place to be at not at home? Bit confusing there. Keep working! You're doing great.
Gabby, I never really knew you were a poet. :P I think this is good, but what was with the size and the color red? D: Red is an angry color...
