Whyo?

Why?
In my life of hatred and lies.
I found the One who seemed for me.
when it seemed that I was a mistake
I saw you there.

WhY? have you done this to me?
Leading me into the wreck I've become
Making life unbearable torturing hatred
Why? have you done this to me?

When life started looking to the better
'cause of you You left me in my life
leaving me with the pain and lies.
Hating and consuming in my own loss.

WhY? have you done this to me?
Leading me into the wreck I've become
Making life unbearable torturing hatred
Why? have you done this to me?

I thought you were the one for me.
But now I know it was a mistake.
You were my mistake.
I was my own mistake.
Now I lie here in this pool of blood
thinking. Is life worth its pain?
Why? Why does it aways lead to pain?
When things start to get better I'm always knocked down.

And in my sorrow I turn to my last friend
It never says no. It helps you deal with your pain.
It lies there, wating for you.
I lie in this pool of my blood. Turned to the last resort.
As my friend, covered in blood, falls to the ground.
I feel the last inch of life slipping away.

Why? Have you done this to me?
Always leading me away. In to my pool of pain.
So I found my way to a new pool.
And I sleep forever, knowing that, life always leads to my pain.


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Yeah...

I been listening to 'we sleep forever' by 'Aiden'

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yp10L6VBPjE

 

Wow, just wow, this make me want to cry it's so sad

 

Really? Wow...I didn't realise it was that sad...

 

Wow... it was very sad.
~~~
I'm sorry but I feel the need to ask you something.
So if its ok I'd like to ask you, a somewhat rude question... >_<

 

... Yes...

 

wow risk nice for an emo xD Jk

 

x3 so sad ;-;

Nice poem. *hugs*

 

Dude I must say I am impressed xD

This bit was my favourite part, ^^


Nice poem RSK I can see where it comes from. ​

 

Man this is so... Old... I hate it when I read all my old poems, they make me cry T-T

 

Why has everyone gone emo? im not saying its a bad thing of course it just seems that the vast population has become more emo

 

You're one to talk... *Points to username*

Anyway, nice poem. I wish I could write decent poems xD.

 

... -__-;;

 

lmao, that coming from you? xD


RSK I still think this is an awesome poem ^^ I think you should post more of your work. ​

 

I haven't written any in ages...

I usually only write poetry when I fell I need to.

 

Risk don't spam. A plain emoticon doesn't count as post worthy. >_>

 

Sorry . . .

 

I like your poem because its like a poem.