Why?!

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Darkcloud, Sep 25, 2008.

  1. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    My mind is aching,
    My soul is breaking,
    How much longer are you going to lie to me?
    Every time it appears,
    My goal is within my reach,
    You snatch it away with ease,
    All for 'concern and worry'.

    My heart is failing,
    I lose another piece of myself,
    With every breakdown that emmerges.
    Why must you do this to me,
    To us?
    Do you honestly think I'd leave you,
    If I obtain my true desire?

    This would give me inner peace, but if you continue,
    You'll only bring me pain.
    I need to leave,
    In order to save us, don't you see?
    You know this, yet
    you hold on, despite the harm you do.
    WHY?!
     
  2. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    I really like this, it feels really strong, almost desperate.

    My favourite bit being:

    The idea of having no other choice but to let go, and feeling held back by someone you care about. It's sad, you can feel how much the person wants to break away.