Digital Art Why so serious?

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Wabba, Dec 19, 2007.

  1. Wabba Twilight Town Denizen

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    Inspired by the new batman movie
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    Let me know what you think
     
  2. SplitOverload Chaser

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    It's a very niec tag dude. GJ.

    Though the border isn't doing it justice. Take that away. And if you can, sharpen Joker a bit. It'll help make it more of that modern style, as I leik to call it. I'm loving the depth, and the text works nicely. The fx have good style. I see no problem on that.
     
  3. Mathias Jay beauty is in everything

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    Like he says^

    Take away border and sharpen Joker a bit.

    Dat is all.
     
  4. KingdomHeartsMovie Destiny Islands Resident

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    Agree with them.

    The border isn't doing it for me and sharpen joker a bit. Otherwise, it is a very good banner which reminds me of the Joker's character.
     
  5. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    Ah I like it. Very good colors and flow.

    My suggestions are to fix your text. It's big and blocky, takes up space and averts from the stock/focal. Perhaps a simpler font, manipulated a little into the style.

    As for the effects, I'd sharpen some of the effects out in the left and right to add more depth. And put some light behind Joker (I think that's him). Not a lot, just enough so it's around his arms and a little up to his shoulders, no more than that. it'd give some meaning to the light splotches out in the open area's.

    Also, remove the border. It looks much better without. =)

    And I don't mean to be mean but... I'd remove the Wabba text. xD
     
  6. Wabba Twilight Town Denizen

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    Took some of the suggestions, think this looks alot better
     
  7. KingdomHeartsMovie Destiny Islands Resident

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    Yes, I agree. That is really good. Good job. I like that you are willing to take on board suggestions, now it is pretty much the best it can be.
     
  8. Wabba Twilight Town Denizen

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    Thanks, the only thing i dont want to change is the text. Though the font is blocky, i think it has that "Joker" feel. But yeah, i like it alot more now as well.
     
  9. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Well, the only thing that I don´t like now is the font, but since you don´t want to retire it, I have nothing else to say =/.
     
  10. Jube Formerly Chuck's

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    DOn't really like the colours for Axel but it still looks good.
     
  11. Wabba Twilight Town Denizen

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    Thats part of my sig... not the sig i want c&c on :x

    And since so many people dislike the font, ill probably end up changing it. Ill edit tomorrow, thanks everyone for your input.
     
  12. Spitfire I'm a little high, and a little drunk.

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    Well other than that sharpening that you fixed.

    Just get rid of the text it looks horrid. Just change the font and don't make it so big.

    Other than that its fine.
     
  13. SplitOverload Chaser

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    I actually liked the text. Any text looks good, as long as you know how to work it. If I were you, I'd make it come in the direction out of Joker. Looks like it's coming out. Make it diagnally coming up from Joker.