Why is porn so addicting?!

I mean, it's has so many different...

[Now, that I have your attention, I have written 16 bars of lyrics for a rap that I was supposed to give Hippie Jesus, but he left, so...I dunno what to do.

Anyways, here it is. The topic was music....so yah.

Everyone listens to music
Your mother sister brother
Aunt Uncle Father or romantic other
Verse, Chorus, music, sample
What you like depends on what's your angle
For example
That band rocks and that guitar is my hero
'Cause it's killing so much villians
As it's rhythm reflects my ego
But, some would rather spit on a hot beat
Sing on a new key-board
The instrumental is my shield
My lyrics is my sword
As the choir sings on a new accord
I'm the savior of this music game, so you can just call me your lord

And there you go. Questions? Comments?]

 

Wow, dude. That's really cool. D:

 

Why thank you.

Wow, 40 views and just one response? =/

 

No, porn is not addicting. Hentai is addicting.

 

You want my honest opinion?..............It's deep and crazy as f*ck. That sounds like something lil' wayne would spit, but yours has a deeper message to it. The only thing that I wasn't feeling was the ending. Good idea, but the punch could have been better. Keep at that sh*t, for real. That was damn good.

You have elevated your game sooo much. Keep working hard and one day you'll make it, just if you need a producer, don't forget me. You and ghetto hit me up. haha

 

oh wow....THAT...WAS...AMAZING! you gotta keep going bro!

 

Your lyrics are like poop, that came from a butt.

 

Kill yourself

Let me guess, that was a joke right?

Let's see you do better.

 

Shit into my anus.

 

It's the T&A .. who doesn't love those things? ;D

 

Work on omitting excess words for quick delivery and maintaining the flow. Good job though.

 

Cool story bro.

 

Thhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaanks gaiz!