please dont scream at me if i messed up >> cause this is like my seconded poem ok my third seconed one didint turn out so great.. All alone in this cruel world... No family or friends... Not safe not protected... Harmless child.... Sees the world and becomes scared... Hides in a corner... She cries of sadness... Isn’t there anyone to help this sad child... But always know this... Your never alone among this world... There are people like you that have no hope... They dream of true friends.. And people with hearts... All they wanted is to be is loved... There are people out there for every one... Well probably not me.. I met her one day that poor girl... But a stranger came... While I was at school... He fell in love with the sad little girl.. And now she’s free from that small little world... But when I came back I felt a little sad she was my friend... From this vile world... Now these days I come to this corner.. People see it as hope... But some how I feel weird when I thought of that day... I noticed I am different from those who are afraid... I may know this world is evil and vile.. But where there’s evil there has to be greatness.. I know im strong and I’ll protect myself... No one loves me.. So I guess I’m stuck with myself... When it rains I become happy... Because I met her that day... But it makes me cry when it’s a sunny day... I heard she died.. By that vile stranger... That single guy... That ended her life.. When I’m at that corner I feel she’s alive.. And I know she’s waiting for me.. In the heaven in the sky.. When it rains... I know she’s crying... Knowing that we’ll never find love... But some how I’m glad there never be love... But sometimes I wonder.. If we met our loves... Would we be happy... Or would we regret it.. She would always say... Its better to be with some one.. Then alone... But I know that one day she’ll forget me... But I’ll never forget that sad little girl... And I know I’ll never try for love... Because I think love is pity... They only wish for some one to talk to... For some one to listen and to be kind... But we all know there’s no one.. No one in the world that would be that kind...
THat was one of the saddest things I have read in a while, it made me cry slightly! XD I love it just breattaking love it! ^^
Really nice poem but i gotta say u shouldve shortened it i dont think ppl are gonna read all that if its a poem i donno thoguh lol
Don't change a thing. Wow. this poem is really really sad but awesome. It's kinda weird cause i started to read this and now it's raining outside.... I especially liked how the lines were followed by an elipsees it slows down the poem, and makes each line distinct and meaningful. Awesome, right more.
