Why can I never think of titles for these damn things?

New Poem ^^ rawr xD

I don't know exactly how I came up with this one except I was thinking about something this morning and it reminded me of a dance 8D

So I guess the dance would be a metaphor? (I can never remember which way round metaphors and similies go >.<)

Hope you enjoy it ^^

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Caught in the music
Trapped in the dance
That burns with a fever like fire
Claiming everything with the deepest passion
Fueling the darkest desire
Burning brightly
holding tightly
It wont let you go

Caught in a song you cant escape
Electricity like lighting strikes
Reaching into every part
It steals your dreams
It steals your heart

But still the dance carries on
Sweeps you off your feet
Takes over you completely
Leaves you breathless
Leaves you weak
Clouds your thoughts
Consuming every element

It hurts us and it confuses us
But to live without the music
Is to live a life of loss
Which is why we take every chance
Why we join every dance
And we search for that fever like fire​

 

Awsome poem CTR and your right music makes us feel alive.

 

Brilliantly written. The poem has a rhythm that draws you in, just like the music and the dance. 10/10.

 

Thank you both very very much ^^

~<3​

 

wow that was real good i loved this one CtR *hugs*

 

*hugs back*

I am really glad you liked it ^^

It's the first time in a while I have been happy with one of my pieces at first draft :3​

 

wow this one was better then all of yours before !!

 

:glomp: Thank you ^^ that is really wow of you to say :)

Maybe I am improving ^^​

 

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I dunno >.> I think a good title would be something like Nightlife or something like dat *gets brick'd*

Again, nice flow, rythem, nice word choice :3

 

Yay!

:D A poem! By CtR! Even Bettuh!

*reads*

*bookmarks, sorts into list of poems written by you*

This, is one of my favorites. Srsly. You ARE somehow getting better. I didn't believe it possible. I'd rep you, but since you earned your 5TH gem. . . You dun need anymore, ROFL.

 

*hugs* thanks Rosey <33 *kicks person who bricked you* xD

^^ I'm glad you liked it :) and thanks for the compliment xD

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-_- You would be surprised at how many times I had heard that recently -_-

=/​

 

lol @ title xD


I love this poem. Some of it is very well written. Word choice is great.

 

Thanking you lots <3

^^ I am glad you liked it xD esp since this is the first one you have seen 8D​

 

Cool poem CTR i like it :D

 

It seems like such a long time ago since I posted that first poem you ever saw :3 ^^ I am glad you liked this one too

<3​