well.... use better text then it will look better ^_^ i like it other wise oh and blend the pics in abit too.
The text version is the better one in my opinion. I like the black and white color scheme. You have some good drawings on there but the one on the right side is a tad bigger than the one on the left. Try making it a touch smaller so the two images are symmetrical in size. That will give more balance to the work as a whole and allow you to keep the main attention on the text instead of the text looking like an afterthought. This will make the whole thing look more like a single cohesive piece. As for the blending of the two art works into the the piece a bit more, I think it's because of the sharp edges to the pieces that they look so much like they were pasted on. Try smoothing out those edges with the smudge tool set to a smaller size or you can try making a separate layer with both pieces on it. Place that layer under the top one and apply a small Gaussian Blur to it. Then, select the top layer with the original two drawings on it and do a Select - Modify - Contract. Contract by about 1 or 2 pixels, then select the inverse and delete those one or two pixels from the outside of the image. Final step. Go back into Select - Modify and this time pick "Feather". Feather the images by whatever you contracted them. Thus if you removed one pixel from the outside edge, then feather the rest of the pic by one pixel. The end result is that the top image with blend smoothly into the gaussian blurred one underneath. This allows the whole thing to look soft around the edges and thus more like it belongs to the background. I hope some of that makes some sense. Feel free to PM me if you want clarification. Also, just so you know, I like the background you've chosen due to the fact that it doesn't detract from the main images that much. Good choice.
I like the original one with text, it filled better and flowed better, where as the new one just looks idk...out of place, but i say with text.