where are you

where are you my silver wings to fly on
my angel to caress in the snow

where are you my mr. wrong-to-right
my unknown challenge in the dark

where are you my blackest light
my love and sacrifice in the fire

where are you my beloved hatred
my tear in the sunlight

where are you the one who'll see me in the crowd
my eagles eye in the fight

where are you my soldier who i can fight beside
my true equal and opposite ​

just like any other 12 year old...

 

Wow this is nice =] I like it a lot ^_^

 

Thank you much ^_^

 

Gawd I love it :OOOOO

 

Thats really cute..
and deep..
nice descriptive language. I love the use of oxymorons and repitition :3

Good work ;D

 

:glomp: sumi-chan!!!! This is so beautiful~ <3

 

Thankies ^_^
I'm still looking ;_;

 

Some people say that rhyming is a wieght on the creative mind.
Well it definately wasn't for you! Good work! I'd love to hear more. :)