When....

When will the tears stop falling,
when will I be allowed to breathe,
this pain hurts terribly,
this feeling just keeps calling.

Happiness is but a fleeting moment,
it comes and goes,
sadness and more hurt,
that how that emotion flows.

In the sun I find no brightness,
in its rays I feel no warmth,
all has become darkened,
everything having a gloom I confess

I find myself sitting in a chair,
crying inside and out of my head,
smiles and laughter no where to be found,
nothing to be said.

How long does this pain last,
when you have lost something precious to you,
when you wish things could be the way they were before,
back when there actually was happiness in the past.

Sorry....usually I don't write things that are this sad.....just felt a poem might help lighten my mood a little.....

 

wow, that is a sad poem, but it's also very well done. i hope it did make u feel better.

 

Wow... This is... different... coming from you. *hugs* But it's a very good poem... Great job, Last... :)

It's good to let your feelings out through poetry... It helps alot.

 

i think , its well written

it rymes mostly.

so i like it

 

Thank you Princess.....thank you Destiny *hug*....and thank you Chervalier....