well, im new here, i love to write poems, and most of my friends think i should publish my poems, but im not for sure if im that good yet, so heres one of my poems, and if someone could do me a fave, and tell me what they think of it, id be seriously happy. this poem i made for my friend who was depressed and wanted to end her life, i read this poem out loud in front of my whole class including her and in the beginning i said 'i made this poem for some one i care for who is like a sister to me, so i hope she likes it bacause this ones for her' after class she came running to me hugged me as she was cring, saying she wasnt going to end her life, and that i matter to much to her to end her life now. i feel so special, so this is for you panda, i love ya like the sis i never had, but always wanted. <333 The Black: I know that you’re hurting inside, And I have even seen you cry, But please don’t leave me, In all this black… I know that this tormention of life is getting you down, But PLAESE just, don’t go around, Thinking that you’re going to escape from me, And that you’re going to be happy, Because you, know as much as I, That you leaving me, By myself in black, Is not a very good act. You think it’s a fact, That you’ll never recover, And that you’ll always suffer, But no! I’m here to tell you that I won’t leave you in the black, And that I’ll always be at your back, To help you, and heal you, Because it’s what I’ve got to do, Because I love you!
^^ your really welcome, I write my poems from my heart and soul.^^ I'm glad you like it, and please don't give up on someone you care for. I know i wont ever.
Oh wow. Very good. I could really feel the emotions in this. For some reason it reminded me of the song Falling Inside the Black. XD Either way, the poem was very good. Keep it up.
