Traditional Art What do you think of this?

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Bond of Flame, Feb 18, 2009.

  1. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    An RPG screen I made, and I'm VERY proud of it!
    Sora is battling Cloud(once again) in the Olympic Colliseum.

    Sora vs. Cloud:
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    Well, what do you think?
     
  2. demonchick25 Hollow Bastion Committee

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  3. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    Fixed it :) And NOW take a look at it XD
     
  4. demonchick25 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Ah XD

    It's not bad. The colors of the command box make it look a little face. I would sugest using a shade of blue and red that's less bright and more grey. It would give it a more realistic look.
     
  5. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    This isn't really real art, it's just sprites plastered onto a sprite background and MS painting some boxes.


    Honestly, the most I can give is a 2/10, sorry.
     
  6. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    JUST some sprites? You must know how long it took to make this...
     
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    Sadly, I have to agree with Xaale.


    Also, the command box is difficult to read.
     
  8. fire mage Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Interesting, how long did you take to make this?
     
  9. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    About an hour or something, and it's still not perfect. But I'm still AMAZINGLY proud of it :)
     
  10. ╬ProperArtist╬ Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I'm not really a fan of sprites so I don't really like this piece at all.
    Now if you had of made this from scratch in photoshop, only using these as a reference and drew everything yourself I'd be impressed.
     
  11. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Well, yes, just some sprites. You didn't make them yourself, you got them off of the spriters resource.

    I understand that it took a bit to make, but even an hour isn't that long.

    It was a good try, though.
     
  12. Shizzy Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I'm gonna agree w/ Xaale, too. It's interesting, but I'm not fond of the command menu. I'd say 4/10
     
  13. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Don't spam, lil woj.

    Why not say WHY it seems cool, give some critisism?

    I'm sure the maker would appreciate it, and your post won't be deleted by staff for being spam.
     
  14. fire mage Hollow Bastion Committee

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    It could be better if it had more action going on in it. Like spectators or something watching the fight. I didn't know people could make sprites I thought they pasted them or photos swapped or some other means.
     
  15. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    I made a lot of these things by myself, y'know.