We share one thing,

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  1. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Books,
    Fills the mind with wonderful things
    Not all are wonderful some,
    Grieving, happy, disappointing

    Books,
    Leave you hungry for more
    Feeds you knowledge
    Feeds toy desire, hope
    Leave you mischievous

    Books,
    Been around for some time
    From the beginning of time
    Walls of unspoken language

    Books,
    Are of different taste
    Romance, Blood, joyful, loathing
    Distasteful, mystery, Death

    We've all fallin in love
    With some small thing in this world
    And it's all in one word

    Books.
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    I know that some of the words don't flow, but I've been so out of it, when it comes to poetry that... I've lost my touch... V_V
     
  2. sinister King's Apprentice

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    that's some very nice poetry...
    well done!
     
  3. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Very nice; I liked it.

    Just to let you know, I think you put 'wold' instead of 'word' in the last sentence of the last stanza.

    Besides that, it was great.
     
  4. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Hahaha.... xDDD
    Thanks.. I fix the ****** mistake.

    I'm glad you guys like it. :3
     
  5. sinister King's Apprentice

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    it's a pleasure to read good poetry...
     
  6. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I'm happy you think so.
     
  7. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    books! i've never read a poem about books before. this one is very nice ^^
     
  8. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Gasp...

    Tis a Honor for you to take a liking to my work. Your poetry ish awesome that i'm like speechless all the time.
    :3
     
  9. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    Yesh liking your work is a very easy thing to do. Please keep it up :3
    And thank you so much. :)