Digital Art We Say to Those Who Are In Love, It Can't Be True 'Cause We're too Young

*cough* I love that song. *un-cough*

Anyway, I was listening to a certain song, saw this stock and was like 'ZOMFG SIG.'

So here it is. xD I couldn't decide on coloring so I did a few. xD

 

i like the black and white one.

 

D:

Read This, PLEASE.

 

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i didnt see much to fix so i just picked the one i liked.

so heres your cnc:
in the last one the coloring makes the side of his face look yellowish and bright. it doesnt blend well with the color on rest of his face.

are you happy now?

 

I don't mean to be rude, and I'm sorry if I come off this way, but you shouldn't really be critiquing if you don't have knowledge of GFX.

... But thanks for trying, anyway. =/

 

I like the last one out of the three. It's my favorite choice of color.

Anyways, there isn't much I can see to fix except to just add some more color.

 

Well, the black and white needs a apply image-soft light (50 or so of opacity), the second one needs too the same, and the thrid one is okay, sorry if there are some grammar troubles, so sorry!

 

THE TEXT, IT MOFOING BURRRNS.
Anyways, you need to not lower the opacity like that. It don't look too good :(
Also, is that pentooling? If it is, then good job with it.
But something here doesn't make sense to me....
The lighting.
Cause, his face is all "OMFG THE SUN IS BURNING ME" But the tag is all..."no"
o.O
Make it a little less bright, or brighter. burn tool ftw?
One last thing:
Erase a little bit over his right hand.

 

Yes, the text is horrible. xDD I need such help with it. . .

But yeah, I'll play with the burn tool. I've been afraid of it for a while, but I guess I'll try.

 

Cncncncnc ;D

Well first off, the left side has those odd pixel shaped things. Erase those off, or blur it. The right has a dissolved type of thing, looks all grainy or something. Take that away or just fix that part.

The lighting is vibrant, yet the stock doesn't match it. Like DJ said, use burn tool.

I'm loving the bottom left part though, the form there looks nice ;]

The text needs work. And effects. Try to make your text more visible for b&w sigs. It's a bit harder to see it on them. I would personally make the fonts more arial black style on white, and then gaussian blur and make it near the focal itself.

Eh, but that's just me lawl.

GJ though. I've been planning to make a good sig out of that stock, I've failed numerous times.