Traditional Art watercolor poop

ewewewewewewewew okay my scanner is decided to be a real ***** and since i dont have photoshop this pic turned out really ****ty..... its my first time actually coloring somthing and with watercolor too so yeah..... let your eyes be burned criticize if ya want

 

It really isn't that bad Roxas. In overall it's a pretty appealing, cute drawing :3 (zleee pink! *poune*)

The fingers look really short and stubby however.

 

It's pretty sweet~~
To me however the face seems a little out of angle if you get what I mean.

 

ugh yea i just noticed the fingers >< ew

the face.... yea it seems a little flat.....

 

Redline. In agreeance with Kairi, the angle is contradicting the features. Developing lines are always useful. IMO the breast is really off, but I'm guessing it's just a style thing, so blah. Other things like angular joints, symmetry in objects, etc.