This is a story with my fan character but I will ADD YOUR FAN CHARACTERS. You must put: NAME AGE GENDER WEAPONS WITH ITS NAME PERSONALITY APPEARENCE OR PIC etc Your characters cannot be a heartless,nobody,or unversed unless you want him/her a villain. This story is almost like a journal:through the eyes of(insert name here). Spoiler: Characters http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?115829-My-KH-character http://www.kh-vids.net/attachment.php?attachmentid=28419&d=1316740429 http://www.kh-vids.net/attachment.php?attachmentid=28420&d=1316740512 Note:The Headmaster is the villain but the non-evil characters don't know that yet. Name:The Headmaster Gender:Unknown(mostly male) Weapon:keyblade(keychain:Dark enforcement) Personality:Deep,dark,and mysterious Appearance:The 2nd pic(other form is 3rd pic) Spoiler: Preview #1 "No one knows who I am really,I can't tell my purpose or my goal in my shrouded life.But I am not a Nobody nor Heartless,not even an Unversed but I'm a somebody.I have a heart but I can't feel it but sometimes,I can.I was in a great war,about 10 or 11 years ago but I am the same age as back then,about 18 but more 17.I can't get out this feeling that I'm not supposed to have a purpose but I have a purpose even though I don't know it at all.I have no real side to choose,Light or Dark,I have no order but I have an alignment.It is Oblivion,similiar to dawn but much different.So I sit here on this beach in the Dark margin.I have no way to know my true path but atleast I am someone.I stand in Oblivion as Nitrunn,keyblade weilder of Oblivion who sets out to find his true path in his order in Oblivion.Thats who I am". Spoiler: Preview #2 "I have been fighting for my order since the keyblade war.I can't throw away the strange pain of trying to remember my past.Can I feel,or can I be normal?I just want a path to take,someway,somehow,I'm not sure if I even have a true purpose.At least I got someone to talk to,thats Seila.We train our skills together at the base,Castle Oblivion.I can't tell why but,she looks like she could have the same quest to find their true path they must take.I have these feelings from my heart that makes me feel like we're connected by a strong bond.Just who am I!" Spoiler: Preview #3 "No one knows my true order.I never knew what I'm gonna do next.Today,I had to train in Traverse town.I trained in 3rd district since it has the most space.While I was practicing,a guy named Alex came by.He seemed to be looking for something.When he walked by me to see what I was doing,a group of heartless popped up.I told Alex to stay back but I made the mistake for not seeing him as a warrior.I saw his claymore and it seemed a little familiar.We fought the heartless and took them all out.We introduced ourselfs and found out that he doesn't know his true order as well and seems to be working for my boss,the Headmaster.He was the new guy I heard about and seemed to know Seila.I knew the three of us would be partners but I don't know the right word to replace partners,was it Fri..e..n..ds,friends was the correct word.At that thought,I made my first smile in my lifetime.I'm starting to be normal".
Note:after a while,I will need you to stop voting because when I get some fan characters to be in the story,I will work on the story so you might see Sora,Kairi,Riku,or Vanitas(VANITAS FOR THE WIN,sorry) Heres a little preview/prolouge in the first post. Here I am giveing an update!Everyone is REQUIRED to post info of any fan character they created so I can create the story.Notice:Sorry Sora fans,it looks like Vanitas might be chosen to be in this story but that doesn't mean Riku or Kairi won't get a chance.
NAME Seila March AGE 17 GENDER Female WEAPONS WITH ITS NAME A daikatana (similar to a katana, but longer and wider), with a black blade and hilt and a blue gaurd. theres a red stripe down the center of the blade. its name is Edge of Beginning. (you dont have to add this, but i had an idea where Edge of Beginning breaks and she gets a Keyblade called End of Beginning. if you need a description, ill PM you one.) PERSONALITY Seila is from a world called Edge of New Dawn. She doesn't believe in anything but herself and the sharp side of her sword. She isn't what a person would call a hothead, but she does enjoy a good fight and never turns one down. Seila has a slight obsession with munny; most would call her greedy but she's saving it up for emergencies. She's been known to bring out Edge of beginning with the slightest provocation but won't use it unless she's really angry. She's a truly good fighter. APPEARENCE OR PIC 5'9" with red eyes and dark brown hair, kept back with a black bandana, some strands escaping to fall into her eyes. She wears a fingerless glove on her sword hand and a long glove on her left (it reaches up to her upper arm). she wears a red tank top over a blue T-shirt over a black long sleeved. Jeans and dirty running shoes complete her outfit. Seila's often been described as 'scary looking'.
Ok Loxare,I got Seila on my list but I like to make a slight change,would it be ok if she could have keyblade armor because every character needs keyblade armor,also you need to tell me if she is a somebody,heartless,nobody,or unversed(heartless,nobodies,and unversed are evil so there can not be a good heartless,nobody,or unversed in my story).
Name: Alexander Beucefilous (wow thats a long name lol) Age: 20 Gender: male Weapon: A Claymore, has a crimson red blade with silver lining the edge, a black handle and hilt with a white stripe running around it. The name is Hell fang. Personality: Very carefree and layed back. Most of the time he's playful and not serious at all. When its time to fight he never backs down no matter how overwhelming the odds are and usually comes out on top. He doesn't give off the impression but he's actually very smart and occasionally stops to analyse the situation. About 5 years ago he made a deal with a demon and traded his right eye for it's, allowing him the ability to see his opponents move during battle before they make it Appearence: Has slightly less than shoulder length white hair and emerald eyes, though his right eye turns red when using it. Wears a red trench coat and dark green pants with black shoes. He has black leather gloves with fingers up to his knuckles and carries his large sword on his back. He's often complimented on his good looks.
Ok,I have Seila and Alexander(I'll just call him Alex) but I don't like his weapon's name.Would it be ok if I call it Demon fang?Also,can he wear keyblade armor?
yeah sure. i had a hard time thinking of a name that suited the weapon and that was the best i could think of. could he like switch into it during battle?
Alright, I have added the characters you've made (and received) so far in the first post under the "Characters" spoiler tag. And I also added the previews to the first post as well. Since you haven't really posted much of the story yet, just for organization's sake it would be better for you to keep the previews/characters you get in the first post, that way it'll be easier for you to refer back to, as well as easier for the readers to get to the actual chapters themselves. =] If you have any questions, feel free to shoot me a PM.~
Alright,Its time for the votes to sum up!The winner is Vanitas and Here is chapter 1.I still need some fan characters or you will only get to see chapter 1. Chapter 1 "Welcome my friends!You have been tested and trained for this,a task is ahead and I expect good results".The Headmaster,leader of the warriors of oblivion.He is suspicious time to time but he can be cruel.Nothing can keep him from unleashing his anger from what he hates. "So,what is this task my dear lord"? Seila stepped up to the dark boss to talk about the task. "That question can not be asked yet.I can not give away this important mission for you or I will result to imidiate termination of you three"! Seila stepped back and almost tripped but Nitrunn,a strange but skilled keyblade weilder caught her.He had strange feelings for Seila. "Did you have a nice TRIP"! "Cut it Alex"! "Do you mean the CHEESE"! "Your the one who will get cheesed"! "SILENCE"! Everyone turned to their boss.They stared into his visor covered eyes. "I will not tollerate this behavior of you three,now go rest up for the next day as we will discuss the mission you are required to do to complete your initiation". The three warriors went through the halls of castle oblivion to get to their private quarters.Their rooms were exactly the same,they had a bed,a bathroom,and a bookself.Nitrunn reached his room and layed down on his bed.He imagined what he really was but his daydream ended when Seila knocked on the door. "What do you want"? "Is everything ok"? "Same as usual,not knowing my self,struggling to find my true path.Just as every other day that goes by". "Me and Alex are just the same way.I wish we could find our true path". "Things are changing since the boss man hired us to work for him,he'd help us on our quest if we do his bidding". Seila walked to the window to see the dark void that surronded the castle. "Its a nice night out". "If you want to call it a night.Where are the stars,and the moon"? "I wish we could just get away from it all,just travel to another world and just do away with our lives by having fun and being..being.."? "Friends"? "Yeah,thats the word". Seila left Nitrunn's room and Nitrunn started to think again. "I know we would achieve our goal,someday" After that,Nitrunn closed his eyes and started to sleep. Tell me how I'm doing and I'll post more soon!
NAME: Gexln AGE: 18 GENDER: Male WEAPONS WITH ITS NAME: Darkness' Sorrow. A black and red sword that channels dark energy throughout it, similar in appearance to Soul Eater. PERSONALITY: Cold, aggressive, quick to anger, overconfident, can be sarcastic at times. APPEARENCE OR PIC: Wears an Organization XIII cloak. Short, messy brown hair, blue eyes, pale skin. 5"7 in height. TYPE: Nobody. Has the element of darkness. Other: Feel free to make him a villain/hero/neutral character, it doesn't phase me too much. Just please let me know when you've updated this via vm.
I have no idea what a vm is so I'll update right now.Thanks for the character and stay tuned for chapter 2! Thank you for Gexln and check back for chapter 2! P.S Gexln will be a villain and the right hand man of the Headmaster.
Oh right, keyblade armor. Dark blue and crimson, styled like Aqua's but with a helmet like Ven's. Also, Seila is a Somebody. As for the first chapter itself, I loved it. It could definately be longer, but the length is completely up to you. I noticed some spelling and grammar errors, enough that I had to read a few of the sentences twice. I suggest using a word processor because it'll spellcheck for you. I'll send you a PM of my edits later. Again, I loved the chapter. Can't wait to read more
It was an excellent chapter and i can't wait to read more of the story. lol "Did you have a nice TRIP"
Chapter 2 "What shall we do"?Gexln,the right hand man of the Headmaster was in the middle of a disscussion with his master. "Send the three off to Radiant garden.Their task is awaiting them in that world". "What are you throwing at them"? "A little challenge".The cloaked servant walked off to the central area of the castle where the 3 warriors hang out and wait for their orders from Gexln. "Everything is not adding up!I need some time to figure out the headmaster".Gexln made it the the central area to find Nitrunn,Alex,and Seila there as usual.They talked and waited for their orders. "Look,its the bossman's man"! "You better give him respect Alex"!. "He should respect my behind"!Gexln made a sinister glare at Alex.Alex took a step back. "You three will head off to Radiant garden to complete your initiation". "You will travel by the corridor of darkness".Gexln opened the corridor and the three warriors left with their keyblade armor on to protect them. "Headmaster,do what you wish". Meanwhile in Radiant garden The three warriors arrived but Alex didn't catch up. "Wheres Alex"? "I have no idea but lets just go..together".Suddenly,another corridor of darkness appeared and Alex came out with a bag filled with six tacos. "I brought tacos"! "No thanks Alex,I already ate". "And I'm a vegitarien". "Thanks alot Seila,you could have told me that you only eat vegitables and you two Nitrunn". "Where did you get the tacos"? "Market street in Twilight town".With out warning,a dark floating orb appeared infront of them and they heard the Headmaster's voice coming from it. "Today,you must eliminate the Darkside that I realeased into your area". "Oh snap"! "Can't this wait?I want to finish eating all six tacos I bought"!Even though Alex could't finish his tacos,the Darkside appeared and pounded its fist into the ground. "Get ready"!The battle has begun.
haha i laughed a little more than i should've at this one. So Gexln as a teacher/advisor? Never seen that before haha this should be good. Keep up the good work! If ya need any more characters i could submit some more, but hey it's your call :P
Haha, nice job with the tacos. I noticed that you always put punctuation after the quotation marks, example: "speaking speaking blah". It should go: "speaking speaking blah." Not much of a difference, I know, but that's grammatically correct. Can't wait for the next chapter James!! ^-^
