Walking Alone Where Do i go? I Don't Know i can't see anthing. My HeRaT With Light will it stay? or will Darkness just Come and Destory Light. Still can't see Where im going. Need to go Home Can't find Home A Castle? Lighting Came Rain now walking alone in Darknes and Rain it Would not end. only the Keyblade Holder can Help. :star-wars-smiley-02 Star Wars? Heartless! Hey, Two Keyblades of Light. I Would not give Up Keyblade Help Me I Need to End this. Home Here I Am. Thank You Light. You are the Strongtest thing in the World Thank You.....
Umh, well I see you spoke from your heart . . . but it's kind of lacking structure. I'm not saying a poem has to have structure just . . . Hmmm, Perhaps you should try making your point just a bit more clear. This just seems to be a random compile of thoughts based on light. You were trying though so I give you props, and don't worry. Just keep trying, you'll get the hang of it ^_^ also I believe this is the first poem I have seen that uses animated smileys (not that it's a bad thing)
I find it rather great and magnifiecent... But in some parts I was confused, I'm not judging o being harsh... Just a couple misspellings, comma's would be great...:p But other than that, i'd say this is a great piece...:D
But it doesnt stink xD But really,I like it...its really interseting to read,and makes sense(after a while) :3
