Vexen's Experiment, Roxas's Suffering

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    Chapter 3 Vexen's Experiment, Roxas's Suffering

    Chapter 3

    Larxene now had Roxas. She let him run around….She then took him into the kitchen.

    “You hungry little guy?†she asked…Roxas’s eyes sparkled and his smile turned into a large grin…

    “I’ll take that as a yes,†she said laughing…She opened up the cabinets and pulled out a box of Oreos…She then walked over to the fridge and got out a gallon of milk…She set it on the table then walked over to another cabinet…She opened it and got out 2 small cups…She set them on the table and filled them with milk…She then put the milk back in the fridge…She turned to Roxas and picked him up…She set him down on the counter and handed him a cookie…

    “Cookie!†he shouted while dipping it in the milk….Larxene took one and dipped it in milk…She crunched on it while Roxas continued to play in the milk…

    “Roxas eat your cookie,†she said hoping he would…Roxas threw the cookie in the floor and laughed…Larxene sighed and picked up the cookie…She threw it in the trash bin next to the counter…

    “Roxas…either eat your cookie or I’ll give you some vegetables,†she said with one hand on her hip and her other hand pointing at Roxas…Roxas took a cookie out of the box and popped it in his mouth…He chewed it up and swallowed…Larxene smiled…She would never give him vegetables but it was a good threat though.

    Roxas ate about 10 cookies and then drank most of his milk…Larxene ate few cookies and drunk all her milk…

    “You done?†she asked seeing Roxas not eating anymore…Roxas nodded. Larxene took the two cups, put them in the sink and ran them under some water…She took the box of Oreos and put them back in the cabinet. She turned off the water in the sink and walked back over to Roxas…

    “Now what do I do with you?†she asked putting her hands on her hips. She looked at the clock. It was already 3 o’clock…Larxene looked back at the little tyke who played around with his coat…He chewed on the strings again…

    “5 more hours with you,†she said picking him up…She began walking up to her room with him…Once she reached her room, she set Roxas on the floor, and she walked over to her bed…She sat down…Roxas walked over to her dresser and got her kunai. He put them in his pocket without letting Larxene know…Larxene looked at Roxas and picked him up from underneath his arms…She laid him down on the bed…

    “Maybe its time for you to take a nap,†she said smiling at him…Roxas grinned and laughed…

    “Okay then, go to bed,†she said then got up and walked out of the door. She left it cracked so she could view what he would do…Roxas took the kunai out of his pocket and stuck them in his mouth. He chewed on them…Larxene ran in the room and took the kunai away from him…

    “Roxas!†she shouted angrily…Roxas gave her small puppy dog eyes as tears formed in his eyes…

    “Oh no,†she said softly while covering her ears…Roxas let out a scream and started crying…Larxene ran out of the room and shut the door…She sat outside of it for a while waiting for him to stop crying….He never stopped….


    An Hour Later

    Lexaus came down the hallway to see Larxene sitting in the floor against her door…

    “Where’s Roxas?†he asked…Larxene looked up at him…

    “In there having a tantrum,†she explained…Lexaus helped Larxene up…

    “Hold on…I’ll get him calmed down,†he explained…He walked through the door and shut it…Larxene listened closely…She heard Lexaus talking and Roxas calming down…Larxene sat back down in the floor waiting for them to come out…

    30 minutes later

    Lexaus came out of the room with Roxas in his arms asleep…

    “The best way to get them calmed down when they are crying, is to get them asleep,†he whispered…Larxene smiled…

    “Thanks Lexaus,†she said taking him into her arms…Lexaus nodded and walked down the hall…Larxene took Roxas into her room and set him in the bed…She wrapped a blanket around him…Larxene walked out as Vexen came to her room…

    “Larxene I think I got it!†Vexen yelled…

    “You got the anti virus?†she asked…He noed…

    “Great,†she said. She walked back into her room an picked Roxas back up…She gave him to Vexen once she reached the outside of her door…

    “The Next time you see him…he’ll be his regular age again,†Vexen, said.




    :D so what do you think??? I already got chapter 4 and 5 wrote, but I'm gonna wait an hour before posting the 4th then another hour for the 5th :D
     
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    Great :] I wonder what going to happen next. I need to get back to writing the next chapter of my story now that you reminded me....!
     
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    Chapter 4 Vexen's Eperiment Roxas's Suffering

    Chapter 4


    Vexen took off with Roxas back to the Lab… He walked in and set him in the container he was once in…He locked it…He then put on some goggles and started typing stuff over at his station…another mist sprayed on Roxas…Smoke came out of the holes in the side…Vexen waited for a moment…

    “Experiment Completed†and electronic voice said… Vexen walked to the container and unlocked it… He opened it…He saw Roxas was still at the younger age…

    “What? I don’t understand. How did my anti-virus not work?†he asked…He looked at the computer and found out he had not given him the anti-virus…but instead gave him the sample of the common cold…
    “Oh jeez…They’re gonna kill me,†he said as he walked over to the container and picked up the small child…He walked out of the lab and into the living room where Axel and Xigbar was…He gave them a nervous look and showed them Roxas…

    “What’s up with him?†Xigbar asked… Vexen looked more nervous…

    “Oh well…I accidentally dosed him with uhh…The common Cold…†he said…

    Axel gave Vexen a look..

    “You gave a three year old, the common cold?†he asked standing up folding his arms…

    “Yes but it was an accident and I can’t experiment on him unless he is healthy,†Vexen explained…

    Xigbar looked at Roxas in his arms…

    “Take him to Rhaxas’s room†Xigbar explained… (That is my nobody if she joined the organization…I think this might be entertaining… Rae ex sis... Similar to Roxas...She is 14)

    “Are you crazy?! She likes to be alone and I don’t think she’d want to be a babysitter,†Vexen said…

    “She’s the sweetest girl in the organization, and she knows how to treat a sick person,†Axel explained… Vexen nodded…

    “I’ll go ask her,†he said… he walked away with Roxas and up the stairs… He walked down the hallway until he reached the last door on the left. He knocked on the door and waited… Rhaxas finally opened it.. She had medium length brown shaggy hair, a pink tank top, a pink miniskirt and pink flip-flops…She wore pink gloves with the tips cut off… Her make-up made her look emo as her medium hair is brushed like Zexion’s

    “What do you need Vexen?†she asked in a sweet voice…

    “Rhaxas, I uhh…Well…look for yourself,†he said showing her Roxas… The color in his face seemed lost, his eyes were all red, and puffy…His body heat shot up…

    “You turned him into a toddler, you tried to give him the anti-virus, and instead gave him the common cold…Would you like me to take care of him?†she asked… Vexen was amazed that she knew exactly what happened…

    “That would help out a lot…How do you know what happened to him?†he asked handing Roxas over to her…She held him close to her..

    “I ha telepathy…I can read your mind and see what has happened,†she said as she walked into her room. She turned to look at Vexen before shutting her door…

    “Don’t come back up here unless you have an appointment or if it is an extreme emergency… I’m extremely busy,†she said then shut it…
     
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    Did you even read this? Did you? Do not do this again. Understand?

    On-Topic: You do realise you need that '...' after the end of each sentence, right? You only need one? I don't like how you created the whole new 'OC' member of Organization XIII. It just doesn't seem right and I can't imagine Xemnas doing anymore recruiting during the period of Kingdom Hearts - Kingdom Hearts II.
     
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    I agree but I added my own character for the bad side in my story, and thats probably whats keeping the commenters away. Oh well. I don't care about OC. Its still a cool story. Nice Job.
     
  6. Rikus#1fangirl Banned

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    Chapter 5

    uhhh...no Mustang..I never have and sorry bout that...:( IThe truth is..I never posted the 4th chapter..thank my stupid *** sister :(.... I wasn't even done yet T^T


    my masterpiece is ruined :(

    Well, here's Chapter 5...Its kinda off where my sis had posted Chapter 4 kinda early :(


    Chapter 5


    She put the toddler on her bed and pulled her blanket over him…She placed her hand on his face to see how much his body heat had shot up… She could tell it was already 103 and was very dangerous for a small child… She picked up the phone in her room and called for a help line.

    “I have a small toddler and he has a 103 fever along with symptoms of the common cold,” she explained…the person she was speaking to told her what to do… She hung up the phone and woke Roxas up to see if he was conscious…Roxas opened his small eyes…

    “Roxas…I’m going to ask you a few questions…and I need to know the truth. Do you pinky swear for the truth?” she asked holding out her hand with her pinky out…Roxas nodded and grabbed hers with his then let go…

    “Are you dizzy?” she asked.. Roxas nodded..

    “Do you have any pain right now?” she asked… Roxas looked at her a nodded…

    “Where at?” she asked.. Roxas pointed to his chest and his head…

    “Alright then…I want you to completely relax…I’m gonna try to help you cope with the pain,” she said as she grabbed a chair and sat it next to the bed. She put her hands around his head and started using her telepathy to put up a psychic wall to block all the pain…

    “Is that better?” she asked him… Roxas nodded…

    “I don’t feel anything Rhaxas,” he said smiling… She smiled at him…

    “I’m gonna go get a wet cloth … That’ll bring down the fever,” she said then walked out the room closing it… She walked downstairs and into the kitchen… She got a small cloth out of the drawer and ran some cold water over it…She got out a pot and a can of soup…She heated up the Chicken Soup for Roxas… Once she was done, she walked up the stairs with the cold cloth and the Soup…She heard a crash and some glass breaking…She ran down the hall and opened the door…She saw her window busted out, the bed flipped over and glass all over the floor…Roxas was missing. She ran over to the window and saw someone in an organization cloak running off with Roxas into a corridor of Darkness…

    “Roxas…” she said softly…She ran down the stairs and into the living room where most of the organization members were watching a movie…

    “Roxas was taken by someone in an organization cloak,” she explained… Xemnas looked at her

    “It was Riku Rhaxas…How did this happen?” he asked… Rhaxas looked down…

    “Well…he was sick so I decided to come down here and get him a damp cloth and some soup,” she said…

    Axel stood up and walked over to Rhaxas… his hand in a tight ball…

    “You were responsible for him,” he said, as his fist was barley twitching down his side…

    “Yes I was…” she said as a tear rolled down her cheek… Axel scoffed and walked away…He stomped up the stairs. Xigbar and Larxene walked over to her. Larxene put her arm around her shoulder and gave her hug…

    “Okay sweetie…it’s not your fault,” she said as Rhaxas started crying… Xigbar put his hand on her shoulder…

    “Larxene’s right Rhaxas, it’s not your fault,” he said… Rhaxas sighed deeply…

    “You are still just a kid and you don’t need this kind of responsibility and pressure on you right now,” she said as she broke off the hug…

    “I’m not a kid. I’m a teenager,” she said… Xigbar chuckled a little bit.

    “You are 14…You are considered a kid until you reach adulthood… Besides, Riku is not going to hurt Roxas… DiZ has been trying to get his hands on him so that Namine can restore Sora’s memories,” Xigbar explained…

    “Don’t worry about it.. We’ll find Roxas soon,” Larxene said. Xigbar nodded…

    “You also might want to be on the lookout… I also heard DiZ is looking for you so that he can restore your somebody’s memories too,” Xigbar said. Rhaxas looked at Xigbar…

    “Do you mean Sarah?” she asked… Xigbar nodded.

    “I remember…She went with Sora on his way in Castle Oblivion to rescue Namine and he believes he destroyed half of the organization,” she said…

    “When she lost her heart, her heartless was not born…only you,” Larxene explained… Rhaxas looked down.

    “Well…I’m not worried about me right now. I’m worried about Roxas,” she said as she walked away and up to her room… She closed the door and fixed her bed back up. She cleaned all the broken glass out of the floor, threw it away…She then lied on her bed, and looked up at the ceiling…

    “I’m sorry Roxas,” she said telepathically… She knew he would be able to hear it, but she could not hear him…He was too far away. She heard another crash from outside. She looked out the window and saw a man in a red ensemble standing out by a tree looking around..


    What is to happen?


    Find out in the NEXT Chapter :)
     
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    DAMN YOU! Why must you give a cliff hanger?
     
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    hey this is coping off of SORA! little organzition!!!
     
  9. Rikus#1fangirl Banned

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    how is this copying? He didn't say he was a small toddler and that there is some girl named rhaxas or any of that stuff
     
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    No, its not.. I think it has a completely different plot. If you read ALL! Of the story and not just the last or first one >.>
     
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    my bad sorry i jumped to counsions so fast