Very Early Preview of My KH-Vids Story

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  1. Princess Rapunzel Flower, gleam and glow

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    Here is a very, very, very, very early preview of the KH-Vids Story I'll write next year.

    Riku was walking through the second district of Traverse Town, looking for someone with two of a 'key'. The letter from the king was for him, he was assigned to look for one with the two 'key'.

    A girl with long white hair in a ponytail and bright green eyes(look at avatar) ran past him, running after her was a man with spiky waist length black hair and purple eyes and a girl with long black hair and bi-colored eyes.

    He thought he saw right on what was on the white girl's head, cat ears?! Who would have cat ears on their head?

    "Excuse me....." a voice said from behind him. He looked to see a boy with short messy black hair and deep emerald green eyes. "I'm Harry Potter. You are?"

    "Riku. Did you see the girl who ran past me, the one with cat ears?"

    "Yeah. Hey, have you seen my brother?"

    Riku wasn't sure he knew what Harry meant, just then a boy with sliver hair and neon colored eyes jumped on his shoulders.

    "Harry, where's Hermione and Ron?!"

    "I don't know, Kadaj. Oh, this is my brother, Kadaj. My adoptive brother." He used emphesis on the word, 'adoptive'.

    "Hi!"

    Riku just waved, but said, "Care to join me?"

    "Sure!" Harry and Kadaj said together.

    So the trio started walking together, toward the Gizmo shop.

    *Meanwhile, in the Gizmo Shop*

    Aerith sighed as she entered the shop, Zack and Rinoa caught up with her. She turned around to face one of her partners and one of their children.

    "Zack!" she shouted. "We need to find Yuna and Kad! And Dawn-sensei!"

    "Calm down, Aerith," Zack said. "We don't even know where we are."

    "Traverse Town!" Rinoa told her father. "That was the man at the shop told us."

    Aerith nodded, she looked and saw ninjas coming out of pools of darkness and monkeys. She screamed, but willed The Flower of Destiny and The Heart of Brave in her grip.

    Zack fought with his Buster Sword, and Rinoa fought with The Orge, a double bladed dagger.

    When the darkness ninjas and monkeys were gone, Aerith sighed.

    "Why are those things chasing us?!" Aerith shouted.

    Zack shrugged his shoulders, putting away their weapons, they left the shop as Riku, Harry, and Kadaj entered it.

    So, tell me what do you think? Like it? Love it? Hate it? Let me know, please!
     
  2. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Wow, this is good...the grammar and spelling is very good, so great job. :) I can't wait to see more! XD
     
  3. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Very strange combination! Harry Potter + FF + KH + OC. This story is definitely something different. Looking forward to more!
     
  4. Princess Rapunzel Flower, gleam and glow

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    Thanks for the comments!
     
  5. Destined Working for WDW

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    harry potter...meets FF7AC.....meets Kingdom Hearts...a stetch but hey, isn't all writing a stretch of the imagination. Keep this odd couple going
     
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    Aerith G.! ^^ great story... love the mix of characters.
     
  7. Princess Rapunzel Flower, gleam and glow

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    My KH-Vids Story Very Early Preview: Part 2

    The second part of the very early preview of my KH-Vids Story, KH-Vids Hearts. Enjoy!

    Aerith looked from the railing of the first story ground in the third district. Zack and Rinoa were on the steps, waiting for her. Zack could tell she was thinking about the partner she loved. The partner of ProLucrecia, a member of the family they came from.

    Tears started to form in her eyes, but she wiped them away as she walked toward Zack and Rinoa. The wings on her headband and her cat ears dropped, Zack looked at Rinoa and thought about his wife and son, Yuna and Kad.

    Up in the balcony, Riku, Harry, and Kadaj were fighting some Heartless, Riku willed his weapon, the Way to Dawn, in his grip, thinking he had to protect Harry and Kadaj. But Harry pulled out a silver sword and Kadaj had a double blade katana in his hands.

    "Hey, Riku, what are these things?" Kadaj asked.

    "Heartless," he answered.

    Harry cast a spell on the Heartless, but it backfired, sending the trio flying in the air. Riku saw the ears on the white haired girl's head were down, but they went up as though she sensed them.

    She, the man, and the black haired girl tried to run from them, but they fell upon of them. Riku looked what was in her hands, it was two key shaped weapons, he realized what kind of weapons they were.

    "The 'keys'!" he shouted.

    Aerith lifted her keyblades to show them to Riku. But four sets of walls rose up from the the ground, blocking their exits.

    "Not again!" Zack complained.

    Standing on the top of them were Heartless, darkness ninjas and their monkeys. The six stood up, their weapons out, they were back-to-back.

    "What do you think, Aerith?" Zack asked.

    "What else?" Aerith said. "We fight them, of course."

    "Yeah!" Rinoa and Kadaj cheered in unison.

    "Ready for this, Harry?" Riku said.

    "Of course," Harry said.

    The six split, each going after a group of Heartless, darkness ninjas and monkeys. Aerith was going crazy fighting her group, Zack and Harry teamed up and attacked together, Rinoa and Kadaj did the same thing and attacked the ninjas and monkeys. Riku was fighting the Heartless, dodging each attack they did.

    Once they were gone, a darkness ninja with its monkey appeared, snipping its fingers, large pieces of armor fell and assembled itself together.

    "Oh, great!" Aerith shouted. "Another one!"

    Kadaj and Harry did a combined aerial attack on one of the arms, Riku and Zack started to attack on the legs. The arm that wasn't attacked went straight for Aerith, Harry ran toward her and grabbed her, dropping on the ground as it missed its target.

    Harry looked at Aerith's bright emerald green eyes and Aerith looked at Harry's deep emerald green eyes, they were like that for a while. Aerith was the first one to blush, she pulled him off of her, shouting, "Get off me!"

    She didn't notice when Harry was blushing, also, they got up and fought with their companions. Once they beat it, the armor fell and unseen by them, a heart left the armor. They all fell to their knees, sighing in relief.

    "So, you were looking for me?" Aerith asked Riku after they had regained their strength.

    Riku nodded, Aerith was wondering who would send him to find her.

    "He, too, was seeking the bearer of the double 'key'," a voice said.

    They looked and saw burnitup, Dark Roxas., and Rosey walk up. Did they already know about Aerith?

    "Say, Riku," Harry said. "How 'bout Kadaj and I join you?"

    "Let us join, as well," Zack said, smiling, putting a hand on his daughter's shoulder. Rinoa nodded.

    "Sure," Riku said, he knew Aerith was coming, but he told her, "You can't come, looking at that. My ship runs on happy thoughts."

    "Happy?" Aerith said, hanging her head. Zack and Rinoa looked at her. She was probably thinking about ProLucrecia's partner again.

    After a while, Aerith lifted her head with a big smile, her eyes pointing to the sky. Riku, Kadaj, and Harry started to laugh wildly. Aerith gave a normal smile.

    "Why not?" she said. "I'll go with you, since Zack is my family partner."

    "Riku." He held out his hand.

    "Harry Potter." Harry put his hand on atop Riku's.

    "Kadaj Potter." Kadaj put his hand on atop his brother's.

    "Zack Fair." Zack put his hand on atop the others.

    "Rinoa Fair." Rinoa put her hand on her father's.

    "Aerith G." Aerith put her hand on atop her friends'.

    "One for all, all for one!" Kadaj said happily.

    Tell me if you like it or not?!
     
  8. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    Post all this in the same thread.

    Merges
     
  9. Princess Rapunzel Flower, gleam and glow

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    My KH-Vids Story Very Early Preview: Part Three

    Part Three! Enjoy!

    The group was in the first district of Traverse Town, talking with Dark Roxas., burnitup, and Rosey.

    "Be sure to check out all the shops here!" burnitup said, excited.

    "Also, be sure that you're prepared for anything," Dark Roxas. told Aerith.

    "Here, a little gift from us," Rosey said, giving her a bag of money.

    They walked away after that, Aerith put the money bag in her coat and turned to Riku.

    "So, Riku, how are we going to get to other worlds?" Kadaj asked.

    "Don't you have some sort of ship?" Zack asked.

    Riku smiled and nodded, saying, "Yup. It's just outside that door. But be careful when we're in other worlds, okay?"

    Aerith didn't seem to listen, she just ran toward the door to the outside worlds, but luckily Zack grabbed the strap on the back of her coat and stopped her.

    "Hold it, writer child!" he said in a stern voice.

    "Lemme go, Zack, big meanie!" Aerith cried, running in place.

    Harry walked toward Zack and said, "Let me talk to her."

    He walked up next to her, putting a hand on her shoulder, Harry said, "Aerith, please calm down. We need to get ready before we leave."

    Aerith looked at Harry for a second, staring into his deep emerald green eyes. They both seem to blush as Harry removed his hand from her shoulder.

    After buying some supplies, they headed for the door. Aerith stared at Harry as they walked, he was talking with Kadaj about finding his older brothers. She blushed as she remembered what happened in the third district during the fight.

    Harry noticed Aerith was blushing, he blushed as well as he thought back to the fight in the third district. The only time he felt that way was around Virginia Weasley, Ron's younger sister.

    Rinoa had asked her father to put her on his shoulder, so he did. Aerith could almost see Yuna having Kad in her arms and Dawn working on one of her stories. She sighed as Riku opened the door and showed them his ship.

    It looked similar to the Gummi Ship Sora used, but much bigger. And colored in silver, gray, and black. If Aerith's mouth was visible, her mouth would be dropped.

    "Isn't it a beauty?" he said.

    Harry, Kadaj, Aerith, Zack, and Rinoa only nodded, as they walked toward the opening in the side.

    "Say, Aerith, why were those ninjas and monkeys chasing you, Zack, and Rinoa?" Kadaj asked.

    "No.... idea......" Aerith answered, rising her falling headband.

    Upon leaving the engine room, the group found themselves in very furnished room with a hall leading to seven rooms.

    "For us?!" Kadaj asked, excited.

    Riku nodded, smiling, as Aerith's cat ears went at a familiar voice.

    "Aerith?"

    They turned to see a beautiful young woman with long light brown hair and light blue eyes with some sort of dark blue creature on her shoulder.

    "Lucrecia! Stitch!"

    Stitch jumped from Lucrecia's shoulder and launched himself onto Zack's face. Aerith, Lucrecia, and Rinoa tried very hard to hide their laughter as Zack tried to pull Stitch off his face.

    "Get..... off..... my.... face...... Stitch," he said in a muffled voice.

    Walking up to them, Lucrecia gently pulled Stitch off Zack's face. Then, everyone went to a door, Harry looked at Lucrecia and asked, "Are you driving?"

    "No, the ship will be on auto-pilot."

    After that, everyone went to bed, because it would be a while before they reached another world.

    Harry woke up once to go to the bedroom, as he walked down the hall, he was so sleepy that he didn't know he entered someone else's room instead of his own. But he didn't realize until after he heard a soft moan.

    Quickly opening his eyes, he found he had entered Aerith's room. She was deep in sleep, her long white hair was down and across her bed, her orange top was unzipped a bit, revealing a bit of her chest.

    Also he seemed to notice her headband was off, and their lips were almost close. Harry started to blush as he and Aerith moved closer to each other. Tears almost seemed to form in her eyes. Their lips almost touched as she whispered, "Xem....."

    The next minute, Aerith turned in her bed, and Harry, who was bright red, was outside of her door and walked back to his room, trying to forget what just happened.

    Do you like it! X3 I can't believe what just happened between me and Harry! XD
     
  10. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Well, if you're writing in next year, why do you keep releasing chapters? XD

    It's such a strange combination, like I said before. I'd never have though of it.

     
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