It looks like a good start ;D. The bar on the left looks unnecessary though (I know it's a style but it needs to be worked into the tag to look appropriate and not in need of a crop, y'know?) and the depth is rather funky. The use of colors is solid and the use of lighting is fairly consistent though a bit awkward and I'm not a big fan of the burning on the right side of the face; not to say it shouldn't be burned but instead that I think highlights should have been burned and it looks like it was mostly midtones and shadows. Seems like a bit of effect C4D and fractal spam but it's not too bad. I think it's a quite alright tag that could be worked on a bit more =]. I also think this one would be better suited to a tag with less height and more width but that's just meee.
Haha, thanks. It truly is kind of a start, since I'm still not too sure how to properly work light and depth. It's a struggle for me lately to even start making something. But yeah, I guess the burning is a little strong. I'll keep that in mind. I'll also keep the cropping thing in mind. I'm just going through a big tag phase xD
The only thing I have a problem with is the black bar on the left. It seems out of place. The rest of the tag is great though. Some of the lighting could be fixed but it's only a minor issue imo. Nice job, Chev!
As has been said,the black bar kinda draws attention away from the main pic... But other than that,its great! I love the colours used,and how the whole thing looks somehow soft... Good work :3
