Untitled Poem..

I did this today in class because we had free time, and i had thoughts flowing, and im looking for a title. So any suggestions on that can be nice..

Greed and Desires-*titled given by zeonark*

We can't live to become hero's
that came before.But can't sit here
and wait to rot away.

Roses and thorns are scorned,
burned into our minds like wild
hell fire.

Burning, Burning,Burning
Without no air, Suffacating in
my own desires.

Greed is ingulfing me, trying to
hard to stop this pain.Tears turn
into the sea,and I drown and say
goodbye.

But I can't let go so easily, because
your hand is my last lifeline.

CnC?

 

Title: Greed and Desires

I found it quite interesting. Especially the Roses and Thorns part. Good job.

 

Thank you..i acually like that part the most in the poem..and the title sounds great, can i use it?

 

Be my guest.

Also you spelled "Desires" Wrong.

 

I agree with Zeo. Your hand is my life line *squeels* I love it.

 

Thamk you, and i know i spelled it wrong..i was half asleep when i wrote, we have to meditate every day at school, and i was sleepy..

 

M-Meditate?.............? Why?

 

Some program that gave the school a grant, it's not religous at all..it just calms the mind, really

 

Awesome :33

 

Yeah, but anyway..alot of people think my poems are dark and call me "emo' or goth..xd i dont think so..