Untitled poem

This type of poem I learned in one of my high school english classes
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As I walk in the sunlight,
Bees buzz around me,
Chills run up and
Down my spine.
Everything goes dark and all I see is a light,
Flashing on and off blinking
Green. What is
Happening to me,
I can't see where I'm going.
Just as I think this can't get worse, a
Knight comes along and whacks my head.
Lights turn on and I can see I'm in
My bedroom. It was just a dream!
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So what do you think?

 

pretty kool!
yeah ma class requires this subject too!
n for your title... let me give you an idea... Sweet Nightmare At End...
lol... just from of the top of my head :-)
Sweet cuz it starts out in a nice place, Nightmare At Endrefers to the knight-smacking, spine-chilling, part... lol


---Khilango