This is called pure abtract guys, and this is by far my best abtract evr. I made it actually using my newest style...^^ CnC anyone?
You have to work more on text. =/ And stop blurring the edges like that. I understand you're using the physics of peripheral vision, but that does that on it's own while looking at the focal point. x3 So stop blurring! xD Anyway, the text...start putting more effort into it. Mess around with it. The style you're using is far too simple and it doesn't look at great at all, IMO. I don't really even like the color of the tag, ontop of that. =/ Keep it up. :)
No offense but I'm kinda thinking the same here as with your sinner one (which is sorta negative about the style). However I actually like this one's text. The rest is too blurry though. The center and colors are cool though. 6.5/10 BTW: At first glance though, it looked sorta good.