Ultimate Organization: Ruin and Creation

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  1. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    The Story of Jack Swanson, Pt. 2

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    It had been only a few days since the horrible faled attempt to wipe out the newest organization started by Darxess. Roka had returned, though no one could seem to figure how he got away.

    Jack was now standing before the three legendary Emrald Knights and his Ultimate Superior, who wore armor made from crystal and dimonds. They sat in high backed Chairs, each lavashed with jewls and other rarities. Jack knelt before these four great knights, his helmet clutched tightly under his right arm. he tilted his head foreward, as to not look at his superior directly. After all he had just failed his mission.

    Emrald Knight: "Jack Swanson, we have called you before us today in oreder to adress your recent mission-"

    Jack: "sir before you say anytihng I would like it to be known that I take full Responceablity for what took place in The World That Never was. I know I have Failed you all, and am willing to accept any punishment you wish to gi-"


    Superior: "ENOUGH! You will be silent Jack."

    Jack bowed deeper and muttered his apologiezes. The other two emrald knights who had be silent stood and walked to either side of Jack, each holding their blades at his throat. Jack gulped and waited.

    Emrald Knight 1: "As I Was saying,we have called you to discuss your recent mission. We already know the creator of this organization is Darxess. We want to know how many there are...and any names you may have picked up."

    Jack thought about the request and racked his mind for any sliver of information he could have gained in the chaos that had taken place only two days ago.

    Jack: "From what I saw there were about fifteen of them. though they are growing...a few members attacked us from behind before introducing themsevels to other members whom were in the castle at the time...By now they may number into the twenties. I Do not think Darxess will ever stop accepting members."


    The sitting Emrald Knight then removed her helmet. She had long strawberry blonde hair and peircing green eyes, she was Roan, Jack's love intrest form their academy days.

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    The two knights around Jack also removed their helmets. The one on his left was a young man, in his early thirties. He had short black hair and equally black eyes. His name was Theory, a ruthless knight that had always gotten the job done, no matter how many people had to die.

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    The final knight had deep blue eyes and medium length blonde hair. He was the most "compasionate" of the thee Emrald Knights. His name was Chaos, also know as "Paradox", due to his name not reflecting his personality. He was skilled in all weponary, long range being his best...but his keyblade, the "Arrowstriker" was enough to tell any one that.

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    Chaos: "Rise Jack Swanson."

    Jack did as he was told, and stood his hand aprehensivly resting on the hilt of his own keyblade.

    Theory: "You have done well. Though you failed your mission...returning with a third of the troops assigned to you. You acomplished our main goal, and that was to gather information regaurding this new organization and its power."

    Roan: "And for your efforts, we bestow you with new armour." she made a gesture towards the back of the room where a lowly knight with long blue and sivler streaked hair with silver eyes, had been waiting the whole time. The kngiht was Naomi, a loyal follower of Jack, and his mian source of information. She held the Emrald coloured armour with pride.

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    Jack knelt once more as the Superior stood. He slowly removed his helmet, reveling short messy brown hair with flecks of gray, and deep red orange eyes and chisled features, that one only gained after years of hard fighting. Jack guess he was in his late forties early fifties. His name was Rider.

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    Rider: "As your Superior, I wish to invite you to join the Emrald Knights, Jack Swanson. Should you aceept, you shall recive a legion of knights to use as you see fit, and your own fleet ship, also to use as you see fit. Now with your new freedoms and powers, I lay an ultimate goal upon your shoulders. It will be your duty to gather information on this "Ultimate" organization, and relay it back to me. I want to know names, ranks, magics...and if there are any keyblade masters within its ranks." He turned towads Naomi who nodded and brought forth the Newly created armor that Jack wold soon wear.

    Jack: "Sir I Accept your invitaion and will complete my mission. I Wish to thank you all for this. I have but one request." Rider nodded "I wish Naomi to be included in my company." Rider nodded once more "Thank you sir."

    Naomi then handed the armor to Jack who quickly traded his sapphire armor. Soon his stood holding his new helmet, a smile on his face. Roan conjured a new high backed Chair on the left of Chaos, and motioned for him to sit. He did and the placed the helmet on his head, covering his eyes and face from View. He then nodded to Naomi who quickly saluted and walked out of the chamber.


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    Jack: "Now i have the power to find him. Jack thought with an unseen smirk.



    OOC: hope you guys liked it. i knows its a bit long...but a lot had to go on...so yeah lol ;p
     
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    ...You know what I just love? The fact that every time something fun happens, Nulix is in a plot point. A mean come on! Nulix miss's everything! The last party as well! He missed Wing become a somebody! God, its like every time he leaves people do stuff!... Ah well, at least I have villain's to randomly be serious elsewhere while the others party... My rant aside, I wont be here for most of the day, sue me.

    And Wing! A 5.12/10! (That's really good). Just because Roan had strawberry blond hair! That awesome!
     
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    BIC: Wing was walking though the random hallways of the UPA's massive base. He could not find the others, and he left Ryann some tie ago.

    "Where is everyone?" He asked out loud as he turned another corrner.


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    Gale had been whith Vexneah for a couple of hours now, and the two had been searching for any kind of information they could gather, but not much had been usefull. Gale had found a computer that contained a database of names...but they needed a password.


    "Ah, this is so not cool" Gale said with a sigh.
     
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    Azull smiled as he walked up behind Gale and Vexneah "Good Evening children..." He said slowly...
     
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    Gale jumped and turned around slowly.

    "Oh...its you." He said with a sigh of relief in his voice.
     
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    OOC:Well, if you read the later posts, I said I was going to discuss it with the other admins (you) before I put it into action. We can always discuss for a better day. But it can not be tomorrow. Too many people will be gone (including me).
     
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    BIC: The tale of Xane pt. 3

    "No." the strange man said.

    "No? Why not?" the young man said.

    "Because, If I let you guard my ship, then you would be tempted by the amazing treasured located on said ship. With the temptation of those treasures being as they are you may steal those treasures, run away with them and try to sway the nearest bonnie lass you can find to marry you. Therefore, I cannot let you on my ship. Savvy?" the strange man said.

    The young man like many others was confused like many others over the strange words of Captain Jack Sparrow. The young man had met him whilst stowing away on his ship; The Black Pearl, which was currently docked at Port Royal. Hoping to steal the treasure on it…until Captain Jack Sparrow caught him…

    “Well…..if said treasures really fascinated me as you said they would, then I would just take them from the said ship that I was to guard and the question of me asking to guard your ship would be nonexistent. Therefore I must not want the said treasure on said ship.” the young man retorted.

    “…………..But-” Jack began until he was interrupted by a loud booming noise. “What was that?”

    A young swordsman, Will Turner, ran towards them, out of breath.

    “Jack……heartless…..” the Turner said trying to catch his breath. “They’re attacking the village…..”

    “……Well have fun with that then!” Captain Jack Sparrow said waving goodbye while running/staggering at a surprisingly fast speed.

    “Jack….” Will sighed. Your ship is docked over there.” Will pointed to a big commotion on the other side of Port Royal. “Near the heartless.”

    “Oh bugger.” Jack said silently whilst turning around.

    The young man turned towards the city as well and drew a sword.

    “Since I got nothing better to do….” he muttered.

    The young man went into the city and defended it. He was extraordinarily gifted with destroying heartless.

    In 30 minutes every heartless crawling on Port Royal was gone…

    On a small but stern looking ship , what appeared to be a regular citizen of Port Royal walked towards an old knight.

    “Sir, it seems there is a candidate for knightship in Port Royal.” the citizen said.

    “Then you no what to do.” the knight said.

    “What if he refuses?” the citizen asks..

    “Then capture him.” the knight said.

    “What if he escapes?” the citizen asked.

    “There is no escape.” the knight said sternly..

    The citizen nodded.

    “excuse me….” the citizen said as he approached the young man.

    “What?” the young man yawned.

    “ I believe that you are strong enough to enter…a… school if you will.” the citizen said.

    Intrigued…the young man went along with it.


    A gummi ship….the young man was sure he’d seen them before.

    2 hours……

    3 hours……

    A world full of dust….and a castle….a gigantic castle full of knights….

    “Let us discuss the first order of business.. A group of ragtag nobodies that call themselves The Ultimate Organization.” the young man misheard a knight say. He was possibly the leader.

    “They are being led by our old friend…..Darxess.” The leading knight continued.

    “The Ultimate what?” the young man said.

    “Our enemies and…yours….” the knight who brought him there said.

    “ Master Dragoon!” a female knight with bright pink hair called out. “You’ve returned!”


    “Yes, Alyt….now I need you to take our new trainee on a tour…..” Dragoon smiled.

    The young man walked towards her. “So…are there any other girls around here or just you?” he asked.

    Alyt sighed…she was not going to like this.

    OOC: Well….yeah….
     
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    its pretty good, especially the first part. i had to reread it though cuz it confused me at first. lol. anyway....yeah its really good, nice flow, funny and yeah...
     
  11. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    OOC: Well i guess i missed everybody...oops. lol well hey good story Priateguy, did you see mine on the other page? Any how, i've been messing around and have managed to come up some "artwork" if you will. so lemme know what you think. keep in mind this picture is of the past.
     

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    oh and i give your story a 8.959/10 Wing.
     
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    OOC: Thanks guys. I have all the avatars on my comp, so hey if you want your favorite memory from the origanial Ultimate organization done, just say the word ;) oh, i also started a Gaia avatar shop if you guys are intrested.


    BIC: wing had turned yet another corrner searching for any sign of life. He was relived when he finally cought sight of Bellatrix. He quickly walked over to her.


    "Hey. Its nice to finally see a familar face again."
     
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    BIC: "hey Wing! long time no see!" Bella said, "do you know what we're supposed to be doing?"
     
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    BIC: "Well I think we were invited here so the UPA could ask us to joins it's ranks." Wing said, a slight tinge of worry in his voice.
     
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