Ultimate Organization: Ruin and Creation

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  1. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    *Darxess grins*
    Darxess:"A test subject? Indeed................."
    *Darxess begins laughing*
    Darxess:"And don't tell me...........you're the one behind it..........."
    *Darxess suddenly stops laughing and raises his weapon*
    Darxess:"However...............If its a fight you're wanting..........I can most certainly ablidge."

    OOC:Sorry, but I G2G...............its getting late.......
     
  2. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    "Assimilate?" The being said moving quickly for a second...

    OOC: If you can please let Darxess get roughed up a bit.....
     
  3. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC:Sure, but no power-playing..........and please wait till I get back on............I want to be part of the fight as well...........just wait till tomorrow.

    Just send me a PM and I will respond in the morning. Let me read it and make appropiate changes.
     
  4. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: HEY EVERYONE! THE NEXT CHAPTER OF THE FANFIC IS UP!!! (Note: This is the first chapter I completely did by myself...)
     
  5. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    OOC: ...>:

    I didnt read the whole thing... but now I know that Novice is the one I need to uh... talk to.. :3

    Can somebody tell me what happened? >_>
     
  6. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC:Yeah, its gonna be kinda hard to talk to Novice now. As for me, I am waiting for Pirate.
     
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  8. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: No one's here...Maybe I'll come back later.
     
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    OOC: I'm here... But I guess I'm not in this particular situation now... Oh well, I'll wait. =3
     
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    OOC: i want to do something....or i'll start writing another chapter about Derek...
     
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    OOC: I guess I'll just sketch. Also look for my poll in the art section or just search for you like my pics? It's a post I made to show the members here how my art looks. So far. I did a not so good job with my sketches.
     
  13. hidden_light Traverse Town Homebody

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    OOC: i warned you guys....bu then again, no one's here.....eh, either way....

    Fallen Angel Productions proudly presents:
    The Derek Sol Swan Tales!
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    Brought to you by I’m Being Igonerd By Everyone- “When you feel like no one’s listening to you”

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    Although every man believes that his decisions and resolutions involve the most multifarious factors, in reality they are a mere oscillation between flight and longing.
    - Herman Broch

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    Chapter Two: Promise me this will be my fate and your destiny.

    Memories….Blurred…..People…..Killed…..Destiny….Fullfilled….Fate…..Blood-stained Hands…

    Derek brushed his long hair out of his eyes as he walked. Sweat and dirt covered his beaten and worn out body. His clothes were tattered and worn. His face, calm and composed, despite what had happened to him and his situation.

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    “ Bella! Wake up! Its time for school!” Derek yelled as he locked loudly on the door. There was no response. He punded on the door and it slowly swung open. Revealing the dark room. It was the exact oppsoite of Derek’s. It was completely black and neat. The walls were usualy bare and the floor clean. Cds, video games, Tvs, a computer, and sports equipment were usually the only other things in her room other than the usual bedroom furniture. But today, it was different. On the walls were maps, pictures, and people’s profiles. On the floors lay swords , knives, guns, and chains. Derek stood, frozen from the sight before him. He saw his sister sleeping in her bed looking badly beaten and worn out, in her hand a bloodstained bandana with her name sewn into it and underneath - The Fallen Angel of the Fates/ Destinies.

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    Days passed. He hadn’t told her that he knew her secret now. He dicussed it with their friends. They all knew too. The reason though was hidden from them. Why? Why was she their fate?

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    He saw her kneeling in front of them, tears on her face, blood on her hands. Their eyes-lifeless.their bodies- motionless. Their fate - fulfilled. Her destiny- completed.

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    “ Mr. Swan, are you sure you want to do this? “ the unimportant lawyer asked.
    Derek nodded, “the companies will be under your charge until my sister comes back to take control of them”
    “But Mr. Swan, I don’t understand. Why leave so suddenly? Can’t you stay here despite what’s happened in this town. I’m sure everything will get better. Why leave everything , including the continuation of Project 13, to her? She hasn’t been seen anywhere and is suspected in the…”
    “ My reason for leaving is for my own knowledge. I can’t stay in this town anymore. It isn’t my destiny and my fate has left. I’m leaving everything to her because well….I don’t know why. Project 13 will be halted until one of these people can continue it” Derek handed him a list, “and forget the rumors, got it?”
    The lawyer nodded as Derek signed the last paper. He walked out of the office and headed to the city’s gates. When he reached the gates he took one last glance at his hometown. Everything he had ever known and loved had been in this town. Now he had nothing but his weapon, himself, and the hope he always had even in the darkest times- the light hidden in the darkness. He wiped away a tear as he left his life. The Guardian Angel left the Angel Sanctuary, never to return.
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    “and why would I join you?” Derek asked as he looked at the knights across from him. He was exhausted form their fight and was breathing heavily. His ying blade in his hand.
    “you have no ither place to go correct?and your twin, I believe is a nobody now correct?”
    “yes but not by my own doing. How did you know that?”
    “ all will be revealed in due time. Will you join us?”
    “you’re knights trying to destroy nobodies, who include my twin so no”
    “ Your twin destroyed your life. She murdered your loved ones. She betrayed you and everyone else. She is not your sister. She is a nobody and a monster. She deserves to die” The kinght’s voice echoed and Derek found himself getting furious. His mind began to cloud and only thoughts of revenge were clear.
    “she’s my sis….no she’s not….she’s a murderer…..but she’s my twin…”
    “She is not your twin. She is not your family or your friend. She is the destroyer of lives, the ruiner of destinies, and the wrong reaper of fates. “ the knight’s voice echoed in Derek’s mind and he dropped to his knees, gripping his head. Thoughts raced through his mind as he yelled in pain. All of a sudden, he stopped and slowly stood up.
    “so will you join us?”
    Derek opened his eyes and nodded, “she deserves to pay. They all do. Those heartless wastes of space must all disappear forever”
    The knights smiled.

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    Destiny is not a matter of chance, it is a matter of choice; it is not a thing to be waited for, it is a thing to be achieved.
    Author: William Jennings

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  14. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC:Good job....................*Still waiting for Pirate*
     
  15. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: HEY PIPLEZ!!! I just posted the new chapter of the fanfic, worked really hard on this one. so yeah, GO READ IT OR DIEZ!!!
     
  16. hidden_light Traverse Town Homebody

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    thank you. *takes a small bow before dodging raisin cookies* anyway...*goes off to read....*
     
  17. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Heroes in a half shell.............So what now, Jaxed?
     
  18. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    What now? WHAT NOW?!?! GO READ THA FANFIC!!!
     
  19. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: It looks good Nulix. You're getting better...I'll have the next chapter up in a jiffy.
     
  20. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Back to action..

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