Traditional Art Two of my OC's

hi these are 2 of my oc's (+ you can see the head of my chibi roxas)
the guy is Zneox kagaki and the girl is Megumi kisaki they are related but they are not related by blood they are related as adopted brother and sister "duh duh duh!!!"ok I was bored :P

http://www.kh-vids.net/picture.php?albumid=538&pictureid=4012

 

Awsome job Tear!I like all three,and I used to make chibi characters,but I don't anyomore.I just draw normal characters.And my own ideas.

 

I really enjoy the colouring! <33333

I think you should add some wrinkles and alittle bit of shading in the background. Like shadow's so it doesn't look like there just floating there. xD

But Megumi's next it alittle to small, and her one of her shoulders is higher then the other. xD
Alittle work on the hands [everbody needs that kinda help so no worries].
But I love Zneox. He's perfect, like I said before alittle bit more wrinkles and it's good.

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I like 'em, they're all good, nice work on the coloring.

 

Ooh~ I like their clothes~! Very creative >w<
The character design is pretty unique too, very good~ ^^

though, your drawing however. i think it lacks proportion, and their bodies look rather stiff. But I know you can fix that :3 <3
This is still a very good peice of art, keep up the good work <3 ;]

 

oh yea well at first they were suppose to be a rough design of Zneox and megumi but then I drew Zneox like prefect so I just coloured them in and yea I know Im trying to get the wrinkles but some how they are well I dont know where to put them but im working on it

yea they do haha I need work and thanks :D but my sister still says they are ugly TT^TT talk about mean

 

You got my advice from earlier.

But yes, I'd also suggest that you try drawing different poses?
:3
More practice with the wrinkles.

 

I like these! Awesome job on the details of the characters!

 

Not bad stuff. Pretty basic design with the basic structure of the characters, but the color variation of the clothing and the intricate tyoes of clothing are very nice. Well done overall.