Trust Me, It's Love

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  1. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    This is a song I wrote for a guy I liked. Well you know, before he told me he didn't have time for a girlfriend.


    Verse 1:

    I hope I'm not wasting my time on you
    This heart's been broken too many times, and I'm running out of superglue
    I'm just so scared of getting left behind
    How can I measure up to someone so perfect, so handsome and kind?

    Chorus 1:

    Yes, I truly love you
    And I want you so much
    Oh Jesse, please be mine
    Until the end of time

    Verse 2:

    I know I'm not the type of girl that you usually fall for
    But give me a chance, and I'll be everything you need and more
    Whenever you're around, I can't help but smile
    And my heart beats faster yet slower at the same time

    Chorus 2:

    Yes, I truly love you
    And I want you so much
    Oh Jesse, please be mine
    Until the end of time
    You have no clue how much I wish
    You didn't have to graduate
    But I know if we stayed strong
    We could prove everyone wrong

    Bridge:

    However, I doubt you feel the same
    I'm just another soul lost in love
    But you don't know how much I need this
    And I wanna be good enough
    For you and only you

    (Chorus 2 x1)

    Trust me, honey
    It's love
     
  2. Fellangel Bichael May

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    I love it. The lyrics are emotional and powerful. Great job!
     
  3. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Thank you.
     
  4. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    For some reason I think you need to find a new theme for your songts, because love seems to be out the door...and to be sure...time can always be re-arranged, but feelings, baby those can never change. Your most fierce songs are the backlash ones..these they just make me feel sad because of the comment at the start.

    Are you feeling okay?
     
  5. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Not really. :/
     
  6. Cleopatra King's Apprentice

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    Those are really powerful words for a song. It made me shead a tear. You are a great song writer you're passionate with the words you use & that's a really beautiful song. I just hope you're okay though x3
     
  7. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Thank you. And I'm feeling a little better.