This is a sonnet that I had to write for a class assignment back in October. Some of my other friends liked it and I thought I should share it with all of you guys. Why can’t he see the feelings that we share? The way he acts shows how he cares for me. My heart for him is full of love and care. Just seeing him makes my heart full of glee I am sharing these feelings that are true. Show me you care and our love will prosper. I want to show how much I care for you. I am giving you what I can offer. In my young heart you are always cherished. You are my light that shines in the darkness. Our love for each other will not perish. And I know that you will not be heartless. With you by my side, there won’t be any strife. I will love you for the rest of my life. Comments are appreciated. ^-^
Great poem I like how you have connected with it and the wording can draw parallels with KH. good job.
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it. ^^ Aw, why thank you Chaser. Glad you liked it. ^^ Well, actually, I never noticed the connection it had with KH. xD But, now that I look at it, I can see how it connects. This poem actually came from the heart, hence the name 'True Feelings.' Thanks for the comments and I'm glad you liked it. ^^
