treasure planet: a new map

"if she keeps getting in trouble she will end up throwing it away!"jim said

 

"hello! she thinks im 17! she's 15! my futre hasnt been thrown away..and i was in juvenile!"

 

"you know what forget it...just forget it..."jim said turning to put something away,he sighed

jamie sat on the roof,her head resting aganist the chimney,she was tossing small stones on the roof,she sighed,she had herd the whole fight

 

"look...its not that you shouldnt be telling her off...but you shouldnt be depriving her of fun either..." chrizlee said putting a hand on his shoulder

 

"i dont mean to deprive her...its just...i dont want her to be like me when i was her age...and shes been like this since her mom left when she was 9,she blames her self i think...none of this would've ever happend if her mom haddent had left"jim said

 

"dont blame yourself for her leaving..and you should talk to her...tell her that things didnt work out and thats why she left..make sure she doesent think that she's the reason" chrizleee said

 

"I've tried..."Jim said

jamie looked at the sky and saw a air ship crash into the peir,she jumped off the roof running to it

 

chrizlee felt the ground shake.."what was that?!" she shouted

 

"dunno"he said looking around

the door banged open and jamie,stood with a man,his arm around her shoulder,holding him up right,


jamie-lee sarah hawkins!"jim said


"dad...hes hurt...bad...."she said putting him on the floor

 

Chrizlee ran to help the man...."this is bad.."

 

"the chest....lass...the chest..."he mutterd

jamie gave it to him and watched him open it


"cant let them get this..."He said handing something to jamie

"who?"jamie asked

"the cyborgs..."he said grabbing her shirt,then he stopped breathing

jamie gasped

there was a noise outside

james looked outside"we gotta go! now!" he said as a laer blast came threw the window,he grabbed them both and started running

 

chrizlee looked behind her.."whats going on?!" she shouted

 

we're being attacked!"Jim said

 

"you know what jim..i realise that!" chrizlee shouted as she ran

 

"we gotta get outta here!"He said jumping out the window with them and landing a cart,then started to drive off,he looked behind and saw the inn in flames,he sighed and ran a hand over his face

jamie looked at him,then then the sphere in her hands

 

"what is that?" chrizlee asked

 

"dunno..."jamie said turning it in her hands..


jim looked at it."so thats what they wanted...."He mutterd"again..."

 

chrizlee looked at him.."huh?!"

 

"Nothing..."he said

jamie got it open,green light flew out it,and made a map,"hey is that...treasure planet?"she said

"Yeah...but it blew up when i was fifteen.."Jim said

 

"obviously aint if theres a map of it is it?" chrizlee said climbing over him to get to jamie