treasure planet: a new map

jamie stuck the map into the ground and a big door opend up,you could see it from where the others where

"aw f*ck..."jim said seeing the door,he looked around and saw jamie's solar surfer,he ran and picked it up,jumping on it he flew in the direction of the door

 

chrizlee ran in the direction of the door..

 

jamie walked in

"JAMIE!"jim shouted

 

chrizlee darted in

 

jim followed

 

chrizlee saw jamie.."JAMIE!"

 

she turned"what?"she said

 

"wait there.." chrizlee said panting

 

"we have to go! now! this place is full of bobby traps!"Jim said

 

chrizlee turned around.."now you tell us!"

 

"thats why i came after her!"jim said

 

"this is bad.." she said

 

"come on!"he said grabbing them and running as the floor split

 

chrizlee ran after jim

 

"we gotta go now!"jim tol the others,once they were back on the boat,he said"sh*t...we wont make it outta here..."

jamine grabbed her solar surrfer..."well will...if i open a new portal!"she said putting it on the ledge and jumping off before anyone could get on or stop her

"JAMIE!"jim yelled running to the side

 

chrizlee watched

 

she headed for the portal,about to press the button for home

 

chrizlee watched her.."hurry!" she shouted

 

she ducked under a rock and reached it,pressing a portal for home,she zoomed through followed by the ship

 

chrizlee squealed