Digital Art Time of World Revolution

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Laplace, Jan 1, 2009.

  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Was bored yesterday while waiting for a video to process so I maded this in the meantime.

    CnC (AKA no ratings and actual comments :<).
     
  2. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    Ok, I like the style and the stock you used but there are a few problems

    In my opinion the light at the bottom is unneeded, but if any dis agrees then ok I won't argue

    The text is a little bright and I can read it but it just has that something that is wrong with it, oh yeah the color maybe tone down the color a little and it will be prefect...

    The outline on her face is distracting also the C4D(Atleast I think that's what it is) so take them out and fill it with something else other than that it's good!
     
  3. Virtuoso Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I'm liking the colors and concept in this, but that black pentool at the very right seems a bit uneeded for the tag though, and also get rid of that bright circle/c4d thing in the very upper right, that's also unneeded.
     
  4. Beauxxx Destiny Islands Resident

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    Um..no.
    Everything here is fine.
    Just add more of a guiding effect to give the rest of your effects direction so it won't just look like its plastered on to help compliment the stock. Speaking of which, sharpen her up ever so slightly. May want to also run this baby through curves to experiment more with the contrast settings. Just a thought.

    Also, now that I look at it again -
    Experiment more with font choices. The one you used is a bit too predictable. Tm Cen. Onyx. Futura <- stuff like that is touchable for simplistic tags.

    I'd wear her.
    but nehhh. I think you can do better, personally.
    But good job for something you put together out of randomness.

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  5. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    lolwut?
    Yeah, I need to add more of those line-y effects, I´ve should mentioned it´s still somewhat of a WiP XD.

    For the contrast, I´ll try o.o.

    And as for the text, I have a very limited selection of fonts =\. Plus I was never good at it XD.

    EDIT and bump: Added a new version.