Time of Dying

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  1. Arch Mana Knight

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    Teleporting? I wonder if you kept Holden's power from the RP. 8D

    This was good. Just aviod rushing it.
     
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  2. Aura Goddess

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    Eh, kind of rushed this one. >> Although I re-read it quite a few times, making sure I didn't do any mistakes.

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    Aura, Feb 7, 2009
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  3. Arch Mana Knight

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    Nice. I wonder who that new guy is...

    Void and girly remind me of lesser(as in less badass/evil) versions of two RP character I made. @-@ Write more!
     
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  4. Aura Goddess

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    Kind of longer than usual. I seem to be rushing this story. >> Eh, oh well.

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    Aura, Feb 10, 2009
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  5. Arch Mana Knight

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    Yeah...I blame myself for this. XDX I forced you to type. D:
    So yeah...this was rushed. ;~; Other than that, I liked it. Obviously Aria will survive. :3
     
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  6. Aura Goddess

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    I don't like this chapter. DX

    I had writer's block and I rushed it. ;_;

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    Aura, Feb 25, 2009
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    I can tell that you rushed it but...this was good. 8DDD Holden gets no love from bad guys. XD
     
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  8. Aura Goddess

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    F.I.N.A.L.L.Y.

    Yes. I finally updated this story. Schools keeping me pretty busy so I'll be updating this one slowly as well.

    I know I had a lot of time but I seriously don't like this chapter. Too much dialogue and it feels as if I rushed it. So, if there are any mistakes or whatever, tell me and I'll fix it.

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    Aura, Mar 26, 2009
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  9. Arch Mana Knight

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    No real mistakes...and lol...Holden's getting attached even though he's barely been mentioned a few times. xD That's the only thing I find odd. >8D I want a long chapter soon.
     
    Arch, Mar 26, 2009
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  10. Aura Goddess

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    Blah.

    I know it's short. I have a damn headache. Any mistakes, tell me. I plan to bring most of the action or whatever in the next few chapters.

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    Aura, Apr 13, 2009
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    Blah. I'm not really fond of chapter. Mainly dialogue so...eh. ><

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    Aura, May 15, 2009
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  12. Arch Mana Knight

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    That was a fun chapter. It was nice to see Holden tackle Aria. xD
     
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