Whoever said time heals all wounds obviously has never had something bad in their lives. Nothing can truly heal a broken heart, you just learn to live with it. Nothing heals the pain of loss, not even our dreams. Whenever something is too painful, and too much for us to handle, we suppress the memory of the pain. That's how the human mind works. Whenever something is too shameful we reject it, but the imprint is still there.
The part I've highlighted is sounds like/ basically is the opening to Understanding by Evanescence but only slightly altered. :x I understand if you took inspiration from that though. I'm guessing this is a poem? I like it, could be slightly longer in my opinion though and a bit more original? I don't know but good job I guess.
